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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadowman
Review:
An unexpected split from the main story I hope there will be more of it as so far it looks quite good.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Soooo, one way or another the X-man ends up with a justice demon girlfriend? Hmmm, could be fun!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DofEire
Review:
Neeeeheeheeheeheeheeheehee!!!! Slayer!Hallie should be LOTS of fun!! :D
Review By [DofEire] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kdakmmt
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Hallie the vampire slayer has a nice ring to it. Imagine how scary she is going to be considering all the centuries of experience dealing with demons is going to be. I can see D'Hoffryn having a good laugh at Hallie's expense and he may even let her because a veng.... er justice demon again someday...lol
Review By [kdakmmt] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banditdoz
Review:
lol great work :D
Comments from author:
glad you liked it.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [31 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
Review:
Well, that sucked for poor Hallie - /I/ thought she did an outstanding job, well within the boundaries of Janus' rules. Then again, He might be taking advantage of the situation to save her life in the future and give her some fairly massive support and back up in this Reality...

Not to mention sticking it in the eye(s) of whatever Power is the equivalent of the Powers That Be Useless in Xander and Ethan's home Reality...
Comments from author:
Has more to do with marking his territory and making sure no one trys anything around his two favorites to mess with them or him. Stealing Hallie from D'Hoffryn and the chaos of adding such an ^experienced^ second slayer into the mix was just a bonus.
Review By [trongod] • Date [30 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Janus has a charming way of making sure people know he's serious about protecting Xander and enforcing his 'hands off!' policy, doesn't he? :)
Comments from author:
*chuckle* You have no idea.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AlexanderMcpherson
Review:
This fic is why I wrote The Wish... The title plus the Hallie connection.


besides that... Nice.
Comments from author:
That was a fun fic. Can you write more for it?
Review By [AlexanderMcpherson] • Date [30 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
Pretty cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banditdoz
Review:
Thank you much more fitting punishment :D even if it is a bit harsh ;)
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [30 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
Very nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DragonBard
Review:
Too bad Xander doesn't know about his alternate self's encounters with Hallie, and her friend Anyanka... or does he?
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [28 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slmncpm
Review:
omg i have to tell you that i just LOVE this chapter!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [28 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Lovely! I can see why you had to put this as an alternative to the main story, where you'd already established that Wish/Vengeance/Justice Demons were prohibited from responding to wishes in the Stargate dimension, but -- aside from that -- it makes perfect sense for Halfrek to have been just itching and hoping for a chance to dish out some 'justice' on behalf of the thousands of children wronged, abused, and killed (directly or indirectly) by Quentin and his cohorts.

I can't believe that this is the first time such a wish has ever been uttered aloud in Jack's dimension, but I'm more than willing to go with it and just assume that Xander's entrance into this dimension somehow left a window or loophole open, through which Hallie could bring about at least one vengeance wish. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Justice!

Great writing as ever.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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