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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from eriktheviking
Review:
Still a great fun read.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from kffs
Review:
Ha!

Just keeps getting more involved and complicated.
Fun!

Thanks for writing
Review By [kffs] • Date [26 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
Review:
OH SNAP! When Gods come to visit, this is NOT good! Especially when one of them claims to be your adoptive mother! Time to batten down the hatches, because things are going to get VERY weird!
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
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Kinsey is Fatih's granddad? *Takes out axe and starts sharpening it* Time to play executioner! I never trusted the man, and never will. What he got in Code Ragnarok was the best possible payback for him for all his dealings! Now, I think that sooner or later, Xander is going to find out that he is going to be a father! And Maria Hill and Natasha visiting? Why do I think that Xander is in for TROUBLE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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Tony, never argue with a women over her taste in vehicles. YOU CAN'T WIN! Now, lets see where Jack is heading to, to avoid the Black Widow.
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
LOL! Its not often that Stark gets chewed out in a manner that causes him to faint. And Faith being his daughter is the best one to do it. And Xander, as her husband is no surprise. Those two have always had a interesting relationship.
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
Sounds like Xander has some relatives that are VERY well connected! Best to make sure that as few people as possible know about these relatives.
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Keedra
Review:
I love it. Great work with the crossovers.
Review By [Keedra] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Okay, I get what you are going for here. With the title "Relatives", it's hard not to. I just feel that it's all too much having this many different people all related. It starts to get confusing trying to keep everything together. Sometimes less is better.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [2 Nov 13] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Dhampyr
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You know Xander's house is either about to be ground zero for the mother of all throw downs or the safest place in the Nine Realms at the moment. Given what Sigyn and Hela might do to anyone that so much as breathes wrong near their future grandchild and niece/nephew, respectively, I feel a great swell of pity for anyone that shows up there looking for trouble. And that's not even taking into account extended family. Odin is an equal opportunity jerk to both of his kids at different points in Marvel canon but Frigga is not someone you would want to piss off. I also have to wonder if Vali and Nari will show up to offer support to their newest little brother? I give Natasha and Maria all of ten minutes to check in after speaking with the goddesses in the room. Fifteen if Nat takes the time to figure out how Loki has been playing them all to prepare them for war the same way Fury did and calls them on it.

Ironically, I don't think Sigyn could manage to hide Loki's intentions under ideal circumstances, much less a situation where she has shown he is playing the "good guy" for Xander and Faith. Being the goddess of fidelity does not make one an effective liar. She might apologize for Loki's crude language, though.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun, but I feel sorry for any kids that F & X have with that family tree.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Sandi
Review:
Oh Fuckk!

But really, she's a goddess. That's an act. She has to be checking out the compition for Loki's Heir. Xander is male after all.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the story so far, hope to be reading more soon.

-Does Loki know he married off his son?

-I'd like to see what happens when all the family members meet each other on Xander's side of the family.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from moringstar
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And the punches keep coming, wonder how Xander going to take having hel as a sister. Keep up the hard work can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from KzintiKiller
Review:
This story is FUN! Keep it coming!
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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