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Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I really hope you haven't abandoned such a promising idea right on the edge of amazing and scary things.

Please come back to this.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from spk
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Heck of a place to leave it! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my... what twists and what a cliff hanger...
hope to read more soon ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [26 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from dreameralways
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Still a fabulous story. I feel bad for Joyce and Buffy but since Joyce is in the know, hopefully she will also keep her mouth shut and really confuse them. Looking forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from Muadzin
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Irak is usually spelled as Iraq in English. It is the correct spelling in Dutch though. Which means you might be a fellow Dutchie. ;)
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [18 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Review By [yuiop] • Date [15 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from Xovervore
Review:
This is either one of those typos you wanted to be told about, or there is something very strange about Gibbs (other than his first names, ha, ha):
Gibbs couldn’t help but feel proud of her daughter’s academic achievements.
Enjoying this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, corrected!
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [15 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from Eureka
Review:
Good chapter bit of a long time between updates though. Still lovin the story.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I love the what glass thing. Very much looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from Rich
Review:
There are some interesting bits here. I like the "artificial insemination" angle - it's a lot more plausible than some of the explanations used by other authors. And Buffy's method of escape is a classic, although it will raise a lot of questions for the NCIS team.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, there will be even more questions after what happens in the next chapter :-)
Review By [Rich] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from borgrabbit
Review:
You Ben Haiku'd:

Leaping in to fight
Must avoid the evil plight
Help the hapless child

☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
Updated at last!!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from AllenPitt
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Ziva will lose unless she goes all out--Buffy has a few weak spots --where she was shot in the chest--if Ziva can nail her at that spot, then maybe. But Z. won't be prepared to go that far, she doesn't realize what she's up against.
Does the Council have anything it can do? It's supposed to be this super-powerful organization. Though it might be too late for that now.
Hm. Portions of the US gov. do know about the supernatural -the Initiative / maybe others. Doubt they'd intervene though. The Mayor will be real happy. The scoobies are pretty much screwed at this point.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from war
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A weaked Buffy vs a unprepared Ziva,this should be a interesting fight.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [13 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7. Did you find her name?" from Gideon
Review:
It isn't often that Ziva makes a mistake like that! Gibbs will not be happy!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Nov 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7. Did you find her name?" from spk
Review:
So excited to see this update. Can't wait to see how everything turns out. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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