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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stationary
Review:
ooooh will she take this chance or will she let it pass by?! can't wait to see more!
Review By [Stationary] • Date [5 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leb
Review:
this is good, I hope you write more
Review By [leb] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
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I WANT MORE!!! Come on, this is a cool start. Please write more?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [15 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Aahh, come on! You got to follow thru on this!
Comments from author:
If I try ... I will but not in the right way ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [31 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KrisB
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Oh, I so want to see the results of this! I find the thought of Aunty Ayna funny as well.

I like the concept of Jessie being an imaginary friend. I also like the idea that Willow lost a sister and "forgot" about it while Xander didn't. I like that Xander isn't just the one who sees. Here he is the one that remembers. Part of me thinks that he'd want to go on crusade to clean things up.

I think having his new mom and learning abit more before Buffy and her Watcher show up and that their are neutral and good demons as well would be a good thing.
Comments from author:
On the hellmouth, neutral/good are more rare. "Corrupting influence of the hellmouth" kinda thing, as well as "attracting bad guys".

The concept of Jess being imaginary came out of left field, for me. I had actually planned for that scene to go with 'oh and here's your new neighbour, from Maine I think." (implied crossover with Haven ;p)
Review By [KrisB] • Date [30 May 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MrPowell
Review:
Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow... That was quite the twist at the end. I love it.
Please post if anyone takes you up on the challenge at XZ
Comments from author:
The XZ is rather quiet lately. And yeah... that twist is the very reason I wrote the fic.
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [30 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
Please don't leave it there. this has amazing potential.
Comments from author:
Maybe you could write a one shot :P
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [30 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
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No The End! More!!

Excellent work, combining Halfrek, Xander, the Sunntdale Sybdrome, TONS of other things... Please more!!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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I thought that the part where both Xander and Rose had siblings who died while growing up in Sunndale and everyone forgot once they were dead was both interesting and creepy.
Comments from author:
and inordinate number of sunnydalians have no siblings... or none that we can tell. And one of the two only families we do know that has more than one, one of em was magically created, while the other family both kids were magic users, one of whom was an Asshat, the other a weak shit who someone lucked into being a scooby despite killing a friend and stuff.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wonderbee
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Really enjoyed this a lot, and quite something to see hints as well as the differences there, while leaving us wondering if Hallie is going to grant the wish or not? Hope to see more of this AU someday.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LucyH
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I really love it and I hope you continue it (I noticed its marked as complete) because the potential of a story where Hallie is Xander's Mom is amazing and I'm intrigued on how it would shape everything spiraling out from there.

I liked the twist of Jesse being an imaginary friend that's crossed over to be real and affect reality -- actually makes me think of Drop Dead Fred a bit if I'm honest.
Comments from author:
The Marcie Invisibility effect made me think, then combined with 'some kids have imaginary friends'...
Review By [LucyH] • Date [29 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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