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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Not telling anyone is really a stretch. It's an obvious author's ploy to create tension that just comes off as the main character trying to stick his his balls in a meat grinder for no real reason.

Loved the rest of the chapter, but that bit really comes off as forced and insane.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [18 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from danny
Review:
Please tell me he will have a company made to be able to make replacements
Review By [danny] • Date [6 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from dogbrother
Review:
Just found this remarkable story. I am looking forward to reading more. I was wondering if Xander knows Buffy has a sister?
Review By [dogbrother] • Date [13 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from storiescollector
Review:
Thanks for the update, loved the batcave comment...
Review By [storiescollector] • Date [13 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Addlcove
Review:
Great read so far. Looking forward to seeing where you will take it.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [12 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from LanceAvalon
Review:
This is really good which is why it'll be a horrible waste if you don't cross it with a modern scifi setting. Otherwise the vast majority of that tech is going to go to waste.
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [12 May 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from stardrow
Review:
rogue knight, dark knight

tomato, tomahto
Review By [stardrow] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from cyberfish
Review:
First of all,i want to tell how much I `m enjoying this story.I think it`s well written and has a realist way for xander to gain an edge in the fight against evil.

Second I wonder if Xander has a spacesuit (of course,Xander has a spacesuit. Shoot I`m not thinking clearly) Do you think he will be mining the asteroid belt Or the Moon .Mars the moons of Jupiter for gems and valuabe metals to sell? (like gold,Platinum. Silver,etc )

Third .If you plan to crossover with Stargate 1.How much of the Star War Tech can they realy use? By that I mean how much can they realistically back engineer at this point of time? Some of it sure, maybe the hand weapons,tools, alloys,maybe ,( only maybe ) the engines,Computer chips and programing .Of course if Xanders friends on the ship knew he came from a lower tech world they might (again only might ) of stuffed the ships memory with historical data,or some form of memory sticks,chips,crystals,etc . with that info

Fourth ,Please try to up date soon,(if you can that is)because I really want to see what happens next .I`m betting it the Initiative .

I`m also betting that buffy can`t decide is she want a blaster or not.at lease until she see`sone lick Chewbacca has ( you know the one that looks like a crossbow)
willow will go gaga over Scythe and the ships computer. Of course Giles will worry how this new tech will change the fighting,and probably be semi freak out by Scythe a live computer . After all folks he calls the compute that in the library a devil Machine, thinks it will be the down fall of humanity.
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written set of emotions for Xander's return.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Michaelsuave
Review:
Good to see another chapter of this story posted, I'm really enjoying it. Overall its well written, though use of spell check and double checking to make sure you haven't accidentally transposed words would be helpful. The mistakes are not jarring though, so no worries. Chekhov's gun question, why did you include xander activating the autoblaster, when he introduced the gang to the ship, if he wasn't going to use it for anything and the gang didn't even notice it?
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [11 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Damn, sometimes he is a little slow on the uptake! Great chapter ending! Cannot wait to see further developments!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
interesting. can't wait to see the reaction for the others when they realize Xan is back.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [11 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
I love this story. So glad to see a new chapter and I'm excited for the next.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [10 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from lordamnesia
Review:
Fantastic job! I love that this story is still updating, and I can't wait to see the reunion! Keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [10 May 14] • Not Rated
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