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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from DieselDriver
So by not actually talking, not trusting when there's no evidence of wrongdoing from the other in the conversation they both get the opposite conclusion to what the other is actually doing. Of such matters are wars begun.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Wonderful and sad also. They totally belong together!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Mcspender
One thing is to find your first love and after losing it, hold on the memory of the good times and another is doing what Seo's doing with poor Luke, but well, that's the folly of youth.
And living the kind of lives the have, they should live for the moment and have fun xD!!.
Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Oh, you haven't even seen Seo totally screw up in the love arena, yet.

After all. Bilis Manger *did* say that the two of them once loved each other...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Gideon
I guess "a terrible influence" can mean several different things :) And I am sure they will meet again too!
Comments from author:
As you say! A good title, because it applies to so many situations in so many different ways. And means something different each time.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Damn it! I liked this a lot, sort of sad it's over, and pretty miffed Luke and Seo are on hold (I refuse to believe it won't happen. It's practically imposible for her to find anyone else on earth that she can be with, and this Xander thing is just something she's built up in her mind, since there wasn't a whole lot of substance to their actual relationship).

Can't wait to read the next story.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, everything you've said about Seo's relationship is true.

Let's hope that Seo works this out before Luke gets snatched up by someone else...
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from ellf
I've fully enjoyed this story along with all of your stories... Save partially for "Nothing" (but that's because that particular story was disturbing to read when it came out. Can't reread it. I like that you've taken original characters like Seo and Allison and made them not only relevant but fitting within the universe which you have created.

What started as an excellent Buffy-centered BTVS/Dr. Who cross has morphed into having a new main character seamlessly. Bravo.

I hope that you consider writing some original works, I feel they would sell well.
Comments from author:
Oh, thank you!

I'm glad that you're enjoying my original characters. Yes, I was actually thinking that what I should do is take the really popular original characters from my fanfics and write a unique novel of my own and publish it to Kindle. Then use the fanfiction as a way of advertising my original works.

Like a novel staring Alison! Doing... something... Alison-like! I dunno.

...Or else... I could finally get around to writing the new draft of "Of Our Tears", which is a totally amazing idea that I really should write, at some point.
Review By [ellf] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Gideon
The furies may be over but the repercussions are not! I don't know how long it will take Seo to recover physically but I bet it will take her a lot longer to recover mentally and emotionally! If she ever does :(
Comments from author:
Not to mention Luke. Who almost killed her. And pretty clearly didn't want to.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Mcspender
Weell, the Furies & their little kinky ways, ooh yeah. Too bad that, like the good ole Greek gods they are, they're waaay too proud & tend to overreact for the tiniest things.
And only a very pissed off and far more powerful than them being can set them straight. I wonder if a Seo armed with a AA -12 automatic shotgun in each hand can scare the Daleks away xD.

I think Seo's need to learn that not everything is her fault, and she's only responsible for her own mistakes. I mean, she's not a messianic avatar or something like that, and the messianic avatars have the little habit of getting killed, like Optimus Prime does aall the fraking time. I know, he's a robot and he can back up his conscience and all, but, dude needs to learn to chill out xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from wswords
You are right I need to review more.

Thought the end of chapter 9 was clever.

Your stories always blow way past my expectations. It isn't even surprising to me anymore (beating expectations, still can't predict your stories worth a damn).
Comments from author:
Oh, thank you!

I hope my stories will continue to surpass expectations.
Review By [wswords] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Tir
Aww, you can't make Seo do that!
Comments from author:
I think Alison's just really, *really* scared that Seo's gonna die. But... yeah. Poor Seo!
Review By [Tir] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Mcspender
Oh yeah, The Furies. I kinda like those girls, they're kinda kinky xD!.
And I really hope that the goddess they're about so summon is no the one that I think, that would be problematic :S.

Cool set of chapters, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Oh, I'd say it's extremely problematic, yes.

Thank you, thank you! *Bows.* I am very proud of my villains and... kinky, wait, what?!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Letomo
I'm curious if the 'Goddess' is Willow, Dawn, Buffy, 'Bad Wolf', or some other idea I haven't thought of.
Comments from author:
It will be explored in the next chapter, and again, later, by the Doctor and Dawn, some ways into Seo's future. So... yes! Be very curious. (Particularly since I keep changing what it means by the week, right now!)
Review By [Letomo] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Gideon
Well I guess the Slitheen are temporarily good guys if they are stopping Luke from killing Seo, right? Won't they be surprised! And I don't know if Seo having to call on her inner gloryness and scare the crap out of everyone is going to do much to make her feel less guilty but it is looking like their best bet at the moment. If they can wake her up!
Comments from author:
I think the phrase "scarying the crap out of everyone" is very aptly put, here. But... yeah. Probably not so good for the guilt.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from ellf
You didn't happen to skip a chapter upload by accident did you? I mean 9. Chapter Ten is a bit of a first clue....
Comments from author:
Oh, damn, you're right! I did! Wow, how did I miss that? I'll upload it right now!
Review By [ellf] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Mcspender
I reaaally hope that Buffy and Sarah Jane can stop the killer potatoes from outer space from selling Seo, and of course, saving Luke from making a biiiiiiiig mistake.
Nice to see that Mr. Smith was not really damaged by Seo's malware attack, the thing is what does Mr. Smith thinks about that situation.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I should probably write some exchange between Seo and Mr. Smith about this, but... it just never really worked with the story.

And when Luke comes back into Seo's life for the Year that Never Was (because I liked him way too much in this story, so I brought him back in another one), Mr. Smith kind of gets blown up by the Master. So no real chance to talk, then.

I might have a good chance after a story I haven't written, yet, which shows Buffy's essential role to play in Children of Earth. But that's a whole two story arcs... or "seasons", as I've been thinking of them... away. Seems excessive. Maybe I'll figure out a better chance, sooner.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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