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Review of chapter "Normalcy" from DieselDriver
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Pretty interesting story. I lost interest in the Rowling stories about half way thru the third book but this is much more fun. Look forward to reading more.

Oh yeah, Riley is seriously mentally off balance before he even got powers and they just drove him off the deep end. I think you were saying that he got his powers due to the change made by the psyche of Ginny going back in time and splitting the timelines, same as Luna but she can see both sides due to her "Lunacy". In this case I mean it as simply being Luna.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boy Meets Girl" from DieselDriver
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Certainly gave him something to think about even if she's prepubescent at the time it's still nice to get a hug especially if it is unexpected.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from Shadowman
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A nice version of a redo story. I look forward to the rest of what I hope will be a long story.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from FireFlash
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I just reviewed this one over at that other site, but wanted to add my appreciation here too. :) Not sure which story I like better, this one or FAE... Oh well, I guess that means I'll just have to ask for both to be updated soon. ;)

Keep up the good work!
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [25 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from kdakmmt
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Riley is a dumbass, I lost track at the face palms I did when I read that portion of the story lol Interesting take on the time travel.
Review By [kdakmmt] • Date [25 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Great story! I love the way you are balancing things that change and things that stay the same.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from ChaosLady
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This was great! I spent just about all day reading it. I'm going to track it.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from (Current Donor)Starfox
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Poor Riley - and poor Raven. And there's an ominous vibe to Hufflepuff here... or I might just imagine that...
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from MistofRainbows
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Very interesting story, it's too bad that Raye didn't say they needed to fix his friend. Not that they likely would have but hey... I can see his point about the wizards being evil. I'm looking forward to seeing how things work out for the crew.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Normalcy" from lunalurker
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This story has a lot of good qualities going for it, being well written and thought out in general with the main plot of Ginny trying to manipulate the wizarding world into a better future history... but it is positively jarring whenever we switch over to the very different and unconnected adventures of Riley and cartoon Raven the imaginary friend. Not that those parts are bad, but it really does feel like two entirely different stories of different styles and themes have been smooshed together into one bigger one. So it's a bit of a mess so far.
Just have to wait and see if it comes together better down the road. Good luck and thanks for writing!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Summer" from PATM
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Great reading. Riley is got issues eh?
Review By [PATM] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Summer" from moringstar
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Nice update, I am really enjoying harry/ginny keep up the hard work.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Summer" from kalibex
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"This is it, Riley Raye thought, sweat beading on his forehead."

Tsk, Tsk... ;>
Review By [kalibex] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Escalation" from moringstar
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Keep the hard work coming.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Escalation" from BellJarette
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Excellent. Well written, characterised, and paced. Will we see more of The Guardian?
Review By [BellJarette] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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