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Review of chapter "Adieu" from blackholelord
I will say one I wish you the best of luck writing this. This will be a unique and complex story to write. If possible you can help yourself, by having this so-call fleet to fly to various realities, like Mass Effect, Star Wars, Star Trek and any other science fiction series.
Review By [blackholelord] • Date [19 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adieu" from Xovervore
Just read this. I too like the Traveller Chronicles. You have an original start with the , very appropriate to Chaos, series of little random events culminating in Ethan's ironic sacrifice to his god. Hope you return to writing this soon.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from AlphaBeta
Just wandering when you will update. Hope it will be soon.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from Morgomir
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adieu" from WCSII
I don't know if it qualifies as interesting or sad. But apparently it isn't even worth the consideration to mark this story (or any of your other discontinued works) for following. As you've demonstarted a bad habit of only writing two chapters and then abandoning the story. And when you finally feel like writing again it's a new story entirely, rather than one you've already started, and made progress with. If you ever get rid of that nasty habit, and pick up this story again, please let me know, I would be interested to see what happens.
Review By [WCSII] • Date [6 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from BlueEyedJedi
In thinking on how the people of Sunnydale can be saved, I may have a way to save more than just shuttles and/or transporters alone. Open the front of the Daedalus (Daedalus Attack) and have the Enterprise dock it's shuttle bay there. The Enterprise could use Force Fields to strengthen the connection. Then send all the transported citizens through the shuttle bay onto the SDF1 via the Daedalus. This may not save everyone, but it will increase the numbers saved. Another way to save people involves the other ships, they can help.

Perhaps another way could be seal Sunnydale in a Dome (Energy or Metal) that could protect the Citizens post fold. It's possible that one of the other ships has the capabilities to do this. (Pardon my Brain Fart, it appears you have already incorporated the use of ForceFields to help save Sunnydale.{I often review before I finish chapter.})

If this is the Stargate Universe: Oma Desala or Thor could aid then convertly. If this is not, then perhaps some one dressed as the captain of the Daedalus or Promethius from the Stargate TV show. There are Options.

Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adieu" from JimmX
I enjoy massive mega crossovers too. Hope you continue this one. :-)
Review By [JimmX] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from Vianca
What other ships are there?
Like Aoki Hagane no Arpeggio (Arpeggio of Blue Steel on Youtube), Spacebattleship Yamato, Marsian Successor Nadesico, Techi Muyo, Transformers TOS-BSG, new-BSG, Babylon-5, Star Trek, Star Wars, Stargate, Starcraft, Gundam (Wing/Seed/00, those three are still the best and a Gundanium frame with Phase Shift Armor powered by a twin GN-drive......), Infinite Stratos, Fate/Stay Night, Negima! Nagi Negi, Sailor Moon, Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, Strike Witches, Ranma-0.5, Final Fantasy, Naruto, Ghost in the Shell, Airwolf, Knight Rider, Thunderbirds (both movie and puppet serie), X-com, Anno 2070, Yukikaze, Lost Universe, Freezing, Beast 9, Card Capturer Sakura, Captain Harlock, Galaxy Express 999, ect, ect.

Really, with Gundam you can go so many ways, Strike Freedom, Red Frame Kai, 00Raider, Wing Zero, don´t forget their ships.
Gundam UC it´s 0083 timeline is also intresting and Gundam tech mixed with Veritech and other (transforming) robot tech?

There are so many options, your problem would be not to get drowned in them.
Though a interesting mix of them would be nice.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from BlueEyedJedi
Ramius/Gloval id nothing less than the right man for the job. He will leads his people into a bright future. Clancy (God needed him, so he was called home.) created a True Icon of Greatness in Ramius. This Story is a truely worthy tribute to the man.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adieu" from Bobboky
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from AntonioCC
Just discovered this, and I have to say that it looks good. The premise is interesting, and it's good to see a YAHF that goes in a different way than the usual "Xander choose a different costume and become the Supreme Badass of the Universe" route that too many fics have taken (a bit of an exageration, I know).

Re: Ramius as Gloval. It's interesting to know that in secondary Robotech material, Gloval (or rather Henryk P. Glovalsky, which is his birth name, according to most sources) was a sub captain prior to the SDF-1 crashing on Earth.

Edit: Well, I was using the american comics based in Robotech as a reference, not the Macross manga. In Macross he was Italian, Bruno J. Gloval, while in Robotech he was Russian. The Macross crew seemed to be a bit more international than its Robotech counterpart
Comments from author:
Did not know that bit about Gloval. According to the data I have, his name was Bruno J. Gloval in the original Japanese. Even more so, there are some entries that state that he's Russian while other claim that he's Italian. It's interesting the bits and pieces that are lurking out there.

I have also noticed the tendency in most Halloween fics that a character retains his costume's powers or abilities while everyone else reverts back to normal. I'm guilty of that myself in another one of my stories "The Worthy" where I transformed Xander into Thor. Otherwise, there are a few fics out there that have MANY people retaining stuff from the Halloween Spell like "The Traveller Chronicles" by kedrann which inspired my own version or "Chaotic Circumstances" by Evilguy. Sadly, kedrann believes that he has gone as far as he can with the Chronicles and ended it and Evilguy seems to have abandoned his story as it hasn't been updated since 2006 sadly enough.
Review By [AntonioCC] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adieu" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Wonderful chapter, thanks.

BTW somebody needs to put Snyder in the brig...

Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adieu" from Difdi
> “Buchanan. Ted Buchanan. But I suppose that it would more suitable for you to call me Data.”

Now that just makes entirely too much SENSE. With any luck Data's ethical subroutines will override the psycho 1950s serial killer problem. The thought of Sunnydale's own synthetic serial husband running amok in DATA'S body is terrifying.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from Chan
Today is a good day found a good fic, wonders when Kirk will get tired of Snyder and have security deal with him.
Review By [Chan] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adieu" from AlphaBeta
YYYYYAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! Update! Very well written. Ya, I heard about Tom Clancy. Was read sadden by it. Can't wait to see what the rest of the cast of Buffy dressed as. Don't see many Dirty Pair in the Halloween, or Buffy in general. Nice to see it. Anyone go as her personas, partner? Hope nothing happens to keep the next chapter form coming out quickly!
Comments from author:
Me too. Congratulations on being the first to twig onto the fact of just who Willow was transformed into! I was thinking that perhaps I was a bit too subtle in my hints and clues as to her new persona is and no one would get it! But apparently not as you guessed it.

And as a matter of fact, someone is indeed Willow's teammate, although it isn't Buffy.

I've already plotted out Buffy's new persona and I think some people will be pleased in my choice, although she is a bit obscure. But she's immensely strong and a great fighter which fits Buffy to a T and she rarely uses weapons as well.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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