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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Honestly? I kind of cringed at the dead for a few months deal. I mean, how are they going to explain to Joyce, Hank, and Buffy's friends that she isn't permanently dead and really shouldn't be buried?

Edit: Yeah, I missed the 'unless neutralized' bit. Anyway, I can't imagine she'll be too happy once she's back.
Comments from author:
You are entirely correct. Leaving Buffy dead for a few months would be entirely cringeworthy. However, might I draw your attention to this extract:

"Touching the flower will kill someone for the duration of time he spent on Elba, (imagine this bit in bold) unless it's neutralized."

The violet kills someone for a few months, unless neutralized, at which point they become alive again.

Sorry for the confusion, maybe I should've put it clearer.

Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from Tir
Review:
Dawn's really not very good at planning, is she?

Anyway, I look forward to season 2.
Comments from author:
No, she isn't.

The first chapter's up. I hope you enjoy it.
Review By [Tir] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from PATM
Review:
Did you refer to HG from the series as "him"? I recall Dawns intention that the length of Buffy's death would be a few hours. I still can't shed the idea that Dawn is some kind of villain, her wacky plans to change things run rough shod and frantic mixed in with guess work in a fun Mr gadget kind of way. The aspects of her planning reminds me of Glory's rickety tower to hell. I enjoyed most of the story and a cliff hanger does work well with someones apparent death.
Comments from author:
I did call HG him. If you remember, it took a little while before they figured out that she was female.

And yes, Dawn is really bad at planning.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [PATM] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from Misty
Review:
Thank heavens that there is more to come! Thank you for an amazing story & I can't wait for season 2 :)
Comments from author:
Well, the first chapter's up. I hope you enjoy it as much as you've enjoyed this story.
Review By [Misty] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from CubsKing
Review:
What a place to leave off!

Overall, a very interesting story. To move the existential crisis Dawn went through to a point where she'd better understand (or just be more troubled by it as the case may be) is a fascinating idea. Kudos!

Can't wait to read the next installment in the series!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from Tir
Review:
So, either Leena has some kind of brain problem going on because Dawn used the pen and that was a side effect, or the Pearl is affecting her. Still, I knew it couldn't be as easy as Dawn just curing herself.

And the way Claudia and Dawn are acting just proves that people with mental disorders don't have a monopoly on acting crazy.
Comments from author:
Indeed.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Tir] • Date [30 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from Misty
Review:
I knew it wouldn't be that easy, thank you
Comments from author:
You're welcome.
Review By [Misty] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from Tir
Review:
It would be nice if this could be a turning point for Dawn, but, somehow, I suspect that it isn't.
Comments from author:
Well, you know me...
Review By [Tir] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from Misty
Review:
It can't be that easy..... Can it? Thank you for another great chapter
Comments from author:
Well, if things were that easy, I'd finish the story right there...

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Misty] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from bookworm
Review:
Ooh, yay. I hope this actually lasts and doesn't go horribly, horribly wrong.
Comments from author:
Well, you've read the story up until now. When has anything not gone horribly, horribly wrong? Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Tir
Review:
I didn't know whether to laugh or cry at the magic elephant.

Anyway, why do I get the feeling that Dawn's plan isn't going to go well?
Comments from author:
Well, you'll see how it ends up in the latest chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Tir] • Date [21 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Misty
Review:
I love/hate how you write Dawn's headspace, its exactly how I'd imagine it to be. Thank you for another great chapter
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Misty] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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