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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DavidFraser
Review:
A truly exceptional read... Really enjoyable.
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from angeluscado
Review:
This was effing brilliant. Seriously. I loved Khan in the movie (probably helped that Benedict Cumberbatch is so freakin' yummy), and I love your portrayal of him here.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I believe that Benedict stole the show in that movie, and that Khan was as much a victim as he was a villain. That was my inspiration for portraying him like I did.

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AndreaMaine
Review:
This was a good story and I like the alternate Khan. Khan the villain was a monster, this Khan was a sheepdog and protector.
Comments from author:
When I first saw Into Darkness, I didn't see Khan as the villain of the piece. That was Marcus through and through. Khan was trying to get his crew back in the only way he knew how. He was as much a victim of Marcus as Kirk was. I didn't like that the movie portrayed him as a bad guy when all he wanted was his family.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AllenPitt
Review:
Neat... and since in the other timeline they were all exiled to that planet where most of them died, future Spock wouldn't know about Buffy & company, most likely.
On the 'something's coming' thing, maybe demons/magic return? That'd get weird fast.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Stationary
Review:
amazing au crossover and worldbuilding, love the pace and storyline! wish there was a sequel about the home they make for themselves and how they make money or "resources", i think, starfleet calls it?
Review By [Stationary] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from StrigiformeLover
Review:
"Anderson was an Augment of Khan’s that complained about everything and everyone he disagreed with. He was convinced that only he held the correct answers and rarely did what he was told."

I see what you did there...
I approve.
Let's just hope that Khan decides to eject him into Space.
Comments from author:
You're the only one so far that's picked up on it. I give you virtual cookies!
Review By [StrigiformeLover] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)phyllismski
Review:
great story and it fit so well into the movie and tv shows, awesome work on the characters!
Comments from author:
Thank you. It means a lot.
Review By [(Past Donor)phyllismski] • Date [5 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from clei
Review:
Buffy slowly made her way around the ship. It was massive, with 35 decks that were nearly two miles in circumference. She was inspecting every workstation for signs of tampering from either Mr Scott or any of the Section 31 personnel who were on board. So far everything seemed to be alright. She was interrupted outside of the botany lab on Deck 10 when she felt a tug on her arm. Buffy turned around and smiled. Karen, beautiful, graceful, lovable Karen, was behind her with her arms spread. “Hi, Mom!”

“Hey, baby! I’ve missed you so much!” Buffy pulled her daughter into a hug, smoothing down her dark hair. Karen had inherited her father’s curls and her mother’s coloring, but she had her father’s eyes. Buffy pulled away and pushed Karen’s honey brown locks out of her face and looked green eyes looked into delighted blue. “I can’t believe I forgot how big you are!”
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As I was re-reading this the perfect theme song for this story came to mind.....

Come Sail Away-Styx

http://www.metrolyrics.com/come-sail-away-lyrics-styx.html
Comments from author:
I've heard the song. It's a great pick.
Review By [clei] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Thedruid
Review:
Wow! Not much diffrent from the movie, but the differances are AWESOME. First time I've recmonned a story.

I really hope there is a sequal. Maybe the hellmouths reopen. Maybe old Spock investigates why there has been a time change from before he and the Romlouans went back in time. Maybe that Admiral remains in starfleet and yries to get the Vengance and crew back.

Bad sperling I know. Stupid phone keyboard.

P.S. You need an epilouge for Jim, Kirk and Bones for tjis to really be compleate.
Comments from author:
Your ideas for sequels have sparked some ideas of my own. I'm more than willing to continue to write in this verse so more is a possibility. Unfortunately I have a bad habit of starting seqals ant not finishing them. Hopefully that wouldn't happen here.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from clei
Review:
I liked the movie, but I actually liked your story better. What a lovely mental image to end your story: The Super-Scooby Gang out in the universe kicking evil butts and having fun. I wouldn't mind reading more of their adventures. Hint, hint.
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And better yet, the butt-kicking is going to be on their terms.
Review By [clei] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked the movie, but I actually liked your story better. What a lovely mental image to end your story: The Super-Scooby Gang out in the universe kicking evil butts and having fun. I wouldn't mind reading more of their adventures. Hint, hint.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from magicalbookworm
Review:
loved the story! Awaiting a squeal! :D
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [magicalbookworm] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from FireWolfe
Review:
Fantastic. I do hope you do a sequel. I like Khan desptie every bad thing he did. I probabbly would have done the same. His being with B uffy makes sense and its a great work. It blends perfectly. Kirk and Faith now t hat be something to see lol.
Fire
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words. Kirk and Faith, lol, that would be something to see. My sister said something along those lines too. If I continue this, I'll have to keep that pairing in mind. :-p
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from dragondawn
Review:
very good story!! I would love to read a prologe story to it!!
Review By [dragondawn] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from tosca
Review:
Excellent story! Thanks for writing and sharing. :-)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Review By [tosca] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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