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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Fablesrogue
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Please, please update this! I wanna know if you we're gonna give Xander a Faith/Dawn pairing maybe even throw in Cortana as well if given a human form later on in the story.

I'm also curious to see how the Arbiter would've come to be as well.

Also any thoughts on returning to Iron Shadow as well these two have some much potential to be left unfinished.

An inquiring mind wants to know...
Review By [Fablesrogue] • Date [31 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Sanabalis
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Nice story! I hope you write more of it, it's been a while...
Also, I'm hoping it'll be X/D/F :) The guy deserves lots of lovin'.
Review By [Sanabalis] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Ripples, Part 1" from MasterRahl
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I feel the same way about Willow. She sabotaged any chances he might of had with Buffy and never did anything until she had someone else. On another note in chapter one it sounds like Buffy has a text book 'Electra complex'.
Review By [MasterRahl] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from FinalGuardian
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I love the story but it hasn't been updated in a long while.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Genuka
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care for a knock upside the head? *smirk*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Perdurabo
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Hmn, I gotta admit, I think you're going a little overboard with the Xander-love. Dude's not perfect. It gets sort of annoying when every other sentence out of every female character's mouth is about how brave, awesome, handsome, sweet, thoughtful, and just plain good Xander is. I mean, nobody except Xander and Giles have managed to go an entire conversation or thought without drifting off into praising at the altar of Xander.

I like Xander, too. He's one of my favorite Buffy characters, and I prefer Xander-fic when getting my fanfic fix. But it's doing a disservice to the character when everyone else is doing nothing but talking about how great he is, thinking about how great he is, or defining their relationship with all of their peers based solely on their romantic prospects with him. I get that Faith and Dawn have crushes on him. But we've had a lot of POV from Faith and so far, Xander is literally the only thing she thinks about.
Review By [Perdurabo] • Date [17 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from LFW
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I am enjoying this and looking forward to more
Very good build up to Halloween
and I do hope that Dawn gets a chapter like Willow and Faith
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from CubsKing
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Well, this isn't going anywhere like I expected from reading the prologue. But it's still a very interesting story. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from RockyWilliams
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Neat so far. Kinda like how you gave us a glimpse of the future, and are now going for a (possibly) long build up to that point. Looking forward to seeing how it goes, and just who get's (or at least get's closest to getting) Xander :)
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from ChiVayne
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Very nice insight into Faith. And she has made her intentions clear even to Xander (I certainly hope that the kiss made it clear even to a clueless Xander).
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Studyofchaos
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Now this is a Faith / Xander pairing that looks like it has potential. Faith brought to the Hellmouth early and with real support before the worst of the damage was done will pair up nicely with Xander. That little speech from Faith was a good start also, a few extra smacks upside the head and Xander might not make a mess of this relationship.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from semkirk
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Nicely done. I like your take on Faith and in keeping Diane Dormer alive. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [semkirk] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from CageFire
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Nice new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great summaries. I loved Faiths internal dialog about Xander. I am glad she told him how she feels.


Great chapter!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from thundernaruto
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Great chapter Update soon
Review By [thundernaruto] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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