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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Sanabalis
Review:
Nice story! I hope you write more of it, it's been a while...
Also, I'm hoping it'll be X/D/F :) The guy deserves lots of lovin'.
Review By [Sanabalis] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Ripples, Part 1" from MasterRahl
Review:
I feel the same way about Willow. She sabotaged any chances he might of had with Buffy and never did anything until she had someone else. On another note in chapter one it sounds like Buffy has a text book 'Electra complex'.
Review By [MasterRahl] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from FinalGuardian
Review:
I love the story but it hasn't been updated in a long while.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Genuka
Review:
care for a knock upside the head? *smirk*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Perdurabo
Review:
Hmn, I gotta admit, I think you're going a little overboard with the Xander-love. Dude's not perfect. It gets sort of annoying when every other sentence out of every female character's mouth is about how brave, awesome, handsome, sweet, thoughtful, and just plain good Xander is. I mean, nobody except Xander and Giles have managed to go an entire conversation or thought without drifting off into praising at the altar of Xander.

I like Xander, too. He's one of my favorite Buffy characters, and I prefer Xander-fic when getting my fanfic fix. But it's doing a disservice to the character when everyone else is doing nothing but talking about how great he is, thinking about how great he is, or defining their relationship with all of their peers based solely on their romantic prospects with him. I get that Faith and Dawn have crushes on him. But we've had a lot of POV from Faith and so far, Xander is literally the only thing she thinks about.
Review By [Perdurabo] • Date [17 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from LFW
Review:
I am enjoying this and looking forward to more
Very good build up to Halloween
and I do hope that Dawn gets a chapter like Willow and Faith
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from CubsKing
Review:
Well, this isn't going anywhere like I expected from reading the prologue. But it's still a very interesting story. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from RockyWilliams
Review:
Neat so far. Kinda like how you gave us a glimpse of the future, and are now going for a (possibly) long build up to that point. Looking forward to seeing how it goes, and just who get's (or at least get's closest to getting) Xander :)
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from ChiVayne
Review:
Very nice insight into Faith. And she has made her intentions clear even to Xander (I certainly hope that the kiss made it clear even to a clueless Xander).
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Now this is a Faith / Xander pairing that looks like it has potential. Faith brought to the Hellmouth early and with real support before the worst of the damage was done will pair up nicely with Xander. That little speech from Faith was a good start also, a few extra smacks upside the head and Xander might not make a mess of this relationship.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from semkirk
Review:
Nicely done. I like your take on Faith and in keeping Diane Dormer alive. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [semkirk] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great summaries. I loved Faiths internal dialog about Xander. I am glad she told him how she feels.


Great chapter!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from thundernaruto
Review:
Great chapter Update soon
Review By [thundernaruto] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Ripples, Part 2" from KrisB
Review:
I have no idea where you are going with this. I do actually like the Xander/Faith pairing. I also like Dawn being Faith's best friend and them both crushing over Xander. I think that Dawn would be far more mature on Xander's interest in Faith and actually accept it.

I can't wait for the Willow forcing Buffy to make a promise not to date Xander to come out as well as her going around and trying to scare off all other's that might be interested in him. He might love her like a sister, but that would be enough not to talk with her for a month or two.

Buffy "should have" dated Xander for a few weeks and them just not click or something. The way it was Buffy had Xander's eye and interest and no acceptable way to kill that. Hell, Xander tries to kill those thoughts off, but Willow ain't who he was thinking of.

I'm amused that you had Cordy scoping him out as well. Faith seems to be the only one that has serious attraction to him.

I'd actually be curious on who you are going to have all the girls dress up as.
Comments from author:
Well first, not all the girls are going to be taking part in Xander's costume idea. Faith and Dawn will, and it will expand from there, but Willow will still end up going ghosty and Buffy is still trying to impress angel.

I will say that there is a master list of twenty five people who have costumes from the same source and series who are all part of the story as it moves forward, many of them OCs by necessity. That Master list begins with Xander (who if anyone has any doubt about who he is going as for Halloween then they obviously have never even heard of Halo) and ends with Giles (who went as a certain captain of a very large and impressive ship).

Faith and Dawn are both attracted to Xander in different ways. Faith has a very cynical view of the world and basically had her child hood destroyed, while Dawn is in many ways still living in the fantasy world of childhood.

I will say that I have not 100% chosen final details on relationship stuff in the story as it will be a complex and dynamic thing, but for you and for those who bother to read the reviews (and thus deserve the confirmation) Faith IS the girl mentioned in the prologue.

To satisfy your curiosity though, there are number of very important members of the Spartan-II and Spartan-III projects. Let's just say that Faith is like a rabbit and Dawn will be temporarily of the mute variety.

Figure it out from there.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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