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A Family Barbecue

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Review of chapter "A Family Barbecue" from AtotheM
Review:
Still very cute, I enjoyed it :)
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [23 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Family Barbecue" from serenityselena
Review:
that was quite interesting though poor Buffy and Steve seem to get no break :)
Comments from author:
As Superman says, its a never ending battle. Thanks for the review!
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Family Barbecue" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
If it helps any, this feels very natural to the pair of them. Dawn dating Spiderman is an amusing twist.
Comments from author:
Thanks, it's nice to hear that.

Yeah, the Dawn dating Spiderman thing occurred to me around the time I wrote the first story, and I knew I had to include it. It just seemed far too appropriate.

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [7 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Family Barbecue" from HarmMarie
Review:
I liked this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [5 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Family Barbecue" from burmafrdnow
Review:
well done

And I am also waiting for the revelations!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Th most likely time for me to write a sequel would be after watching Captain America 2. That'll probably get me writing for this again.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [5 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Family Barbecue" from kiwi
Review:
well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [4 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Family Barbecue" from bradsan
Review:
Darn no fair. I wanted to see Xander's face when he discovers that Steve is far from normal.

And Tony calling Buffy mini Thor.

Oh and the faces when they discover that Dawn is dating Peter Park(Spiderman).

So normal not so much, it runs in the family to date superhero's(natural). When they are happy it doesn't matter. Whom or what they date.

So pretty, pretty please.

And good one again.
Comments from author:
I wanted to keep this story low key -- not everyone knows everyones secrets yet, but they'll come out eventually. If I get inspired to write something more in this series, it'll probably include those kind of revelations -- can't you just picture Xander finding out who Steve is during Buffy's wedding? And the Mini-Thor comment sounds like something the best man (Tony) would bring up during the wedding speech.

Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it alright. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [4 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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