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Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from DofEire
Review:
My gods, that was fun! Well done indeed! :)
Review By [DofEire] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story was as lot of fun. I don't know if it was because it was a 'movie script' but I could easily see the whole story in my mind's eye. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Comments from author:
Mind's eye theater style was what I was trying for. I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
fun read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from firedrakegirl
Review:
A wonderful story!
Comments from author:
Well, it turned out okay. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Really enjoyable read, actually I think a sequel would spoil it. Sometimes you have to let people make up their own minds on what happened next.

Anyway thanks for the story.

D.
Comments from author:
I still want to see your take on the challenge :P
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Good finish, but I probably would not have ended it there. A small vignette with Faith and the CyberSlayers on an op would have rounded it out nicely. Wanna try it out? Or mebbe do a sequel?

Your choice...
Comments from author:
No. It ended in an ambiguous fashion intentionally. If you want to do a sequel though, go for it!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Jazzibear
Review:
Very many thanks to BZG for an excellent story very well told: I enjoyed every word.

Looking forward to your next opus!
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from PJxxxxx
Review:
This is a fun story. I would like to have seen more on how the UniSol Buffy reintegrates into the world. But it's a great read anyway and your pacing throughout was spot on. Kudos.
Review By [PJxxxxx] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from LostDragon
Review:
Great story, sorry to see it end.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from texaswookie
Review:
A fun little jaunt through the merging of these two worlds.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it, now I can finish your challenge.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from alkeria
Review:
Great story, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading it.
Review By [alkeria] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from ScorpioP
Review:
You scare me. Your ability to tie such divergent fandoms together, and write so quickly, and so well, is amazing. How do you do it?

You can write the hardcore badass stuff very well, so here's my challenge: pick a "fluffy" crossover from a tween/teen show, something like "Saved By the Bell" or "Charles In Charge" or "Wizards of Waverly Place", and do a story where they interact with the Scoobies while remaining in character, at least until they see that the monsters the Scoobies deal with are real and dangerous. (Or you could twist it and have Buffy & Co. dealing with vampires, wizards, etc., that are comparatively harmless and human-friendly.)

Just one thing: no Smurfs!
Comments from author:
I have never watched any of those shows. I don't watch sitcoms either. Otherwise I would give it a shot.

You know what else is scary? I write in the browser window and in one sitting per chapter, so if my browser crashes or my machine does, I lose everything. DaveTurner said I was nuts when I told him that.
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from TaraLi
Review:
This was a really tough read for me, and only your writing kept me on it. The cyborg-ing of dead humans, especially freshly enough dead that the mind can be re-activated to some degree, brings out a serious level of squick for me. I never could watch the original movies - but I managed to make my way through your story, probably for Buffy and Kendra's sake. Of course, it's hard for them to help Kendra, as they don't know about the induced lesions cutting out sections of the brain, so I really like where you left it - them still working on her, and hope eventually for slayer healing to take care of the problem.
Comments from author:
I wanted it to sound grim as hell. This is not something nice people do. All the medical terminology in the earlier parts was based on current knowledge about how memory works by the way.
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Tempi
Review:
An excellent story. The dragon codenamed Strike Team was a nice touch. I look forward to reading your next story.
Comments from author:
Blame Sunhawk for Strike team's name.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from starwolf
Review:
this has been a fun read, if you do decide to do a sequel i'll read it. thanks for the great ride.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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