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Xander and the Lying Bastard

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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lovely humorous dialog. I am completely enjoying your story and was glad to see Janet added to the mix.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from starwolf
Review:
were Buffy and Willows height adjusted by the spell? have you made any progress on your Whateley story?
great chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment and the rating!
As to your other questions...
Yes the ladies heights were adjusted by the spell and no I have not updated any Whateley stories recently. I've tried but had no luck with my inspiration.
If you want more fanfics written by me you can check out Ficwad under the same pen name.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from nadirjohn
Review:
Glad to see a new chapter. A Good Read as always.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment and the rating!
Review By [nadirjohn] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written sense of playfulness.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment and the rating!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from SpacedCadet
Review:
The story is a little slow but I do enjoy it. More please!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Aaah, damn! They nerved the massagers! Whatever will Cordy do when she realizes it is amateur hour!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment and the high rating!
As for Cordy's reaction you'll have to wait and see. :)
Although I'd think a military physical therapist should know how to give a good massage even if he might be lost on how to give a proper facial...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Selias
Review:
Xander woke up being hit, unfortunately this was nothing new to the young man and although it hadn’t happened in a few years habit pulled his still mostly sleeping body into a ball and he rolled away from the next hit saying, “I’m sorry daddy!” He rolled off the bed and that shook him fully awake. He sat there with tears on his face wondering what happened and where he was.

And then I was done reading.
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting! I'm sorry you didn't like it.
Review By [Selias] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from HMaxMarius
Review:
You're very very welcome! =D

Neat chapter... way to call the SGC on the 'spider/fly' set-up!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting!
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am still enjoying your story a lot. But the first thing that went through my mind when you wrote that the second meeting was going to be on Vancouver Island was, "I wonder if they are going to the studio where they filmed 'Wormhole Extreme'?
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting!
I am glad you're still enjoying but they won't be going near that sound-stage. I just used it because I was there once so I vaguely remember it. That makes it easier to write.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from AnFan
Review:
Nice reply from Xander :) I am surprised that the SGC would suggest the mountain, but then again, it is secure and they would feel that it wouldn't be unsafe since it's their base. Obviously the do need the services of Elizabeth Weir.

I'm surprised also that you didn't sneak in additional people, like Janet. The venue would be perfect for additional people like her, especially given that Xander has stated there will be more people there. It isn't really an escalation to add people to the group. And, Janet would be good to sneak in additional intel on possible healing knowledge they have.

Thanks for the update. Love the story. I look forward to seeing more in the future :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment!
Congratulations you have guessed at part of the next chapter. :)
Janet Frazier will be going in place of Teal'C. The reply that wasn't shown in this chapter mentions it. Should allow for even more fun conversations I think.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from orgasmo
Review:
I hope this next trade doesn't end up so obviously lopsided in favor the SGC. I mean, the Scoobs got practically nothing out of that trade (the tech of the computer is nearly a millennium out of date and all the art and stuff is easily found and analyzed via the tech they currently have). I also don't understand, given how security conscious the Scoobies are trying to show themselves to be, they haven't used their absurdly more advanced tech to try to find out what the SGC knows about them (the language, for example) or at least listen in on the communications as they were coming to meet them.

Quite frankly, I don't understand the purpose of continuing to trade in the first place, since they're already as wealthy as they want to be with their handy-dandy, hack-anything computers and countless bad people to steal from. I understand the first trade, since they already agreed to meet and didn't give away much of value, but to get something like the Goa'uld guns, they'll have to actually give up important items or weapons for something that will probably be less than or equally as effective as what they already have (not to mention the absurdity of asking for "something pretty").

All that aside, I really do want to see more of this fic. I really liked your Shadow fic as well, plus it seemed that most of the fics from the Ship of the Line challenge start out interesting and then fizzle out as the excitement of the author does. I just hope that this continues in a sensible fashion rather than the SGC getting all sorts of tech for basically no cost.
Comments from author:
Thank you for that comment!
I'll try to make sure that their reasons for the second trade, or any further trades are clear in the story. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [orgasmo] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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