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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from DieselDriver
Review:
Well, if this is any indication, I'll be looking for more. Definitely tracking. Will also take a look for anything else you may have posted. I'd sure have been out checking to see if the other planets (1.2 g and .8 g) actually exist before mentioning being from there.

Few minor problems, some words missing in a very few sentences. That's all I can think of. Good story telling so far. Dialogue is pretty good too.
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting! I hope you don't mind if I reply to all three comments here.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to find the sentences with missing words and fix them. I have said in replies before that the book "Ringworld" does not exist as fiction in this fanfic universe. I should put that in an author's note. You are correct in that I am taking liberties with the crew roster and other details. I thought I had mentioned that, sorry. I have considered whether or not they will share Boosterspice with SG-1 or not. You'll see which they do in a later chapter. I hope you enjoy the next chapters as much as the previous thirteen.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DieselDriver
Review:
Heh, I only just realized that none of them went as Teela Brown. It's been quite awhile since I read the book or any of it's sequels but I do know that you modified the L.B. extensively as well as the crew. Must be at least a #3 general products hull instead of a #2.

I can't believe they wouldn't (or Xander wouldn't, if he's read the book) think it would be very cool to visit Larry Niven, maybe give him a ride on a sky cycle. They should also consider giving a dose of boosterspice to SG1 (later, not now) to analyze and reproduce.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DieselDriver
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Great picture but not "actual" according to the story. At the point where the LB was in atmosphere there was nothing left except the impenetrable hull and what was inside it. The wings and fusion drives had been burned off by the "anti-meteor" defenses. Anyone who hasn't read "Ringworld" should do so. Very cool. I had a copy from early on where L.N. got the Earth rotating backwards. Luis was following the midnite line East instead of West.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lovely humorous dialog. I am completely enjoying your story and was glad to see Janet added to the mix.
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Thank you for your comment!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from starwolf
Review:
were Buffy and Willows height adjusted by the spell? have you made any progress on your Whateley story?
great chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment and the rating!
As to your other questions...
Yes the ladies heights were adjusted by the spell and no I have not updated any Whateley stories recently. I've tried but had no luck with my inspiration.
If you want more fanfics written by me you can check out Ficwad under the same pen name.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from nadirjohn
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Glad to see a new chapter. A Good Read as always.
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Review By [nadirjohn] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
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Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Bobboky
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Very good.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written sense of playfulness.
Comments from author:
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Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from SpacedCadet
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The story is a little slow but I do enjoy it. More please!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Aaah, damn! They nerved the massagers! Whatever will Cordy do when she realizes it is amateur hour!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment and the high rating!
As for Cordy's reaction you'll have to wait and see. :)
Although I'd think a military physical therapist should know how to give a good massage even if he might be lost on how to give a proper facial...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Selias
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Xander woke up being hit, unfortunately this was nothing new to the young man and although it hadn’t happened in a few years habit pulled his still mostly sleeping body into a ball and he rolled away from the next hit saying, “I’m sorry daddy!” He rolled off the bed and that shook him fully awake. He sat there with tears on his face wondering what happened and where he was.

And then I was done reading.
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting! I'm sorry you didn't like it.
Review By [Selias] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from HMaxMarius
Review:
You're very very welcome! =D

Neat chapter... way to call the SGC on the 'spider/fly' set-up!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting!
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am still enjoying your story a lot. But the first thing that went through my mind when you wrote that the second meeting was going to be on Vancouver Island was, "I wonder if they are going to the studio where they filmed 'Wormhole Extreme'?
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting!
I am glad you're still enjoying but they won't be going near that sound-stage. I just used it because I was there once so I vaguely remember it. That makes it easier to write.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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