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Review of chapter "Aftermath of War" from spikesplayfulpet
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Great ending to a great story. Thank you for giving the readers an amazing look into the Buffy/Harry Potter World. l look forward to seeing more of your writing.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath of War" from SSanchez
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You don't have to shut the door on this series completely do you? I mean a couple one shots wouldn't be so bad would they? It was great thanks for finishing it. Look forward to whatever you write next.
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath of War" from EasterCat
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Nicely done. Hope you do a sequel, but understand if you don't.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ritual" from spikesplayfulpet
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Yup, knew Buffy couldn't get away without Voldemort wanting something in return. I can't see the ritual going good for our Slayer. I hope that they can figure out a good plan to actually not let the ritual take place. Another great chapter. Keep up the great work.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Accused" from spikesplayfulpet
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I understand Harry getting all upset with Buffy. Seeing her there and not doing anything to stop Dumbledore from getting killed. It makes sense. I'm glad that Buffy finally let the cat out of the bag and let them know that she is really a spy and trying to figure out what Voldemort is up to. It was sad to see the way they laid into Severus because of him killing Dumbledore, although I can't wait to see their reactions when they realize who he trully is. Keep up the great writing.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ritual" from SSanchez
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I was wondering when or what he'd try. The aid Voldemort gave her couldn't have been for free. Good update. I really like this thanks!
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [11 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reign Of Chaos" from spikesplayfulpet
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A little sad to see that Dumbledore had to die. I know the reasoning but still sad. The shadow of Harry in the background will be quite a shock when Buffy finds out I'm sure. How to explain to Harry why she was there and why she didn't stop it. The ending was very touching to see Buffy and Sirius together and letting go and giving into their collective grief. Keep up the great writing, will be awaiting your next update.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reign Of Chaos" from ChaosLady
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The unseen shadow was Harry, wasn't it? I wonder what kind of fuss he is going to make? That was kinds sucky.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enemies" from spikesplayfulpet
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This just got really interesting. Bella is back and has revenge and death on her mind. Who knew,lol. I can't wait to see how this part of the story plays out. I'm on the edge of my seat :) Great chapter. Will be awaiting the next update.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enemies" from ChaosLady
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I knew Bellatrix was going to be a spanner in the works! Excellent update!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Under Your Skin" from spikesplayfulpet
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Great chapter :) Sad to see Buffy get the dark mark, but I am glad that she convinced Voldemort to put it somewhere that isn't easily seen by anyone. Its going to be an interesting ride to see how you have Buffy, Severus, Dumbledore and by extension Draco plan the whole getting the Death eaters into the castle and hopefully not having alot of damage done. Can't wait to see it :) I was just wondering if you might consider Willow to be someone who could possibly remove the Dark Mark at a later time. Her magic is quite different from others and it could be a possibility that she might be able to remove it. Just a thought and suggestion. Keep up the great writing. Will be awaiting your next update.
Comments from author:
You know I had never even considered that before, but it's definitely a good idea. I might just have to add that in somewhere...

Thank you for the review and idea :)
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [24 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Under Your Skin" from ShalaDakiri
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There has to be an entry about this in the Evil Overlord's Handbook. Giving some one who is supposed to be a SPY a mark that's both permanent and easily identifiable? Yeah, brain trust, right there. At least Buffy convinced him to put it somewhere that's easier to hide than on her arm.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [24 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Under Your Skin" from ChaosLady
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This is a bad idea.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [23 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dirty Little Secrets" from spikesplayfulpet
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The great chapters just keep on coming. I'm just wondering if there is a possible Dawn/Draco pairing in the works?????? I always thought that in the books Draco could be redeemed. That maybe he was the way he was because of his father and not because he was just a stuck up snob. Even during the Half Blood Prince you could see that he really didn't want to kill Dumbledore and that he wasn't really trying either. Keep up the great writing. Will be awaiting your next update.
Comments from author:
The Dawn/Draco pairing is something that I will be hinting towards but I'm not planning to write anything especially for it. If I do, it wouldn't be until the end anyway.

Draco is definitely up there on my list of favourite HP characters and I completely agree with you about him acting that way because of his upbringing etc rather than him just being a horrible person. So I just knew I had to give him a chance to redeem himself in the story, and I suppose the Dawn/Draco relationship (even just as friends) would help to push him in the right direction.

Anyway, thank you so much for reading and reviewing... again :)
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Day Is Dawning" from spikesplayfulpet
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Another great update. I liked the fact that you put Dawn into Hufflepuff. Alot of other stories that I read either put her in Slytherin or Gryffindor. She should get along well with the Badgers. Keep up the great writing.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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