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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from DieselDriver
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I think this is another "Englishism", hiring a car. In America if we need a car for a day or two, or even a week or month, we rent one. We hire a person, driver, chaufer etc.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from DieselDriver
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Maybe you meant "Typhoid Mary" not the "Mary Celeste"? The "Mary Celeste" (aka, Marie Celeste) is/was the ship that was discovered abandoned and under full sail. See the reference here:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Celeste

Typoid Mary on the other hand was Mary Mallon, the asymptomatic carrier of typhoid fever.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Typhoid_Mary

I suppose being virtually alone in a normally fully occupied office could be considered analogous to being on the Mary Celeste, I think the Typhoid Mary effect might be closer. I have to wonder now what you were trying to get across.

edit: Ok, after re-reading it looks like you meant on board the ship. "the Mary Celeste" as opposed to being Mary Celeste. "McGee wondered if this was what the Mary Celeste had felt like."
I think it would have been clearer for me if it had said "McGee wondered if this was what being on board the Mary Celeste had felt like." Of course I'm a bit dense at times.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from DieselDriver
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I've watched just enough NCIS to know who these characters are. DiNozzo is a dork. Smart dork but still a dork. McGee is kind of shy, intelligent person. Ziva is an incredibly competent Israelly military intelligence lady (very fine looking too), currently assigned as liaison to NCIS. Ducky is Ilia Khuriyakin aka David McCallum, a much better actor than Robert Vaughn.

I can actually picture them with exactly the reactions shown here in this story. Definitely one of the better ones. Had me laughing at the end of this chapter.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from DieselDriver
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Hahahahaha! USS Reuben James and HMS Battleaxe both came from Tom Clancy's "Red Storm Rising" a most excellent book. I love the conversation that took place the first time they communicated. HMS Battleaxe says "What the Hell is a Reuben James?" to which USS Reuben James replies "At least we don't name our ships after our Mother in Law". If you haven't read this book and this is pure coincidence I'd be extremely surprised. Everyone should read that book.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from (Past Donor)James
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Oh, I hope this means that there will be a guest appearance of the team in the other story!

Gibbs with active magic, scary.

Makes me wonder what was in Abby's cocktail.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from DebraN
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I greatly enjoyed reading Tim's journey of learning to be a Jedi. You've done a great job with this AU and it never feels forced of unrealistic. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from cwolf
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Well. As I said before. Gibbs does have an open mind, and can re-evaluate as a result. All he needs is the evidence.

McGhee a jedi. Check

He's got magic, ok fine.

Sounds like they're going to do some good work.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [30 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Shadowman
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Nice ending though a few one-shots of Gibb's and team as they are now could be interesting.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from DofEire
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Oh, *please* tell me there's going to be a sequel to this charming tale? Jedi!McGee and Mage!Gibbs are soooo much fun!
Review By [DofEire] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from djhardim
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Very good. A couple of things

“Um, boss, how are we going to explain the vampires and the demon to the Director?”

“Leave that to me, DiNozzo, leave that to me.” His phone chose that moment to buzz and he pulled it out, peered at the caller ID and then answered it. “Talk to me McGee.”


If we go by what was said earlier in Chapter 4, then the Director already knew.


...“This is going to be tricky to explain away.”

“Oh,” Ducky broke in, “I’d be amazed if Director Vance doesn’t know about vampires. I imagine that it’s a key part of the briefing he received about the occult after he was appointed to his position.”....


EDIT:

Ziva pursed her lips for a moment in thought. “Then we’re going in hard I take it? McGee can take the remote out and we can -- all -- then deal with them all.”

I think you have one "all" too many in this last sentence.

Thanks again for a great story.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Misty
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*clapping* uber cool. thank you
Review By [Misty] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from VillageOrchid
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Cool epilog/final chapter on this team.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from DarthTenebrus
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Great work, mate. That was a Bloody brilliant story, and Gibbs accepting that he can work magic puts a nice touch on the end of it. So does that make Abby a kind of alchemist, then? Love to see how that came about.

And of course, in a later chapter of "Terran Jedi" I'd like to see McGee get one on DiNozzo with a head-slap courtesy of the Force...LOL
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from lunalurker
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As a fan of both shows involved, I adore every since part of this. :)
Thanks very much for sharing, and looking forward to the main story continuing!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from KzintiKiller
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Gibbs as a magic user scares the pee out of me as much as it intrigues me. You did good, hoss. If you're ever of a mind, a Tim and Abby short story?
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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