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Review of chapter "chapter 3" from MultiverseBeliever
Review:
why does xander seem whipped? *** xander curls up against willows knee*** whats that about?
Review By [MultiverseBeliever] • Date [2 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch15" from twlight
Review:
I do love this wonderful story and I hope that some day you decide to finish/update it.
Review By [twlight] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch15" from spring
Review:
Okay I love this fic so far I think what you have is wonderful. That said I find it horrid that you stopped at a cliffhanger and haven't updated in approximately three years! Please please please tell me that you are going to finish this wonderful fic someday.
Review By [spring] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And We're Off" from MistressRed
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What a great, original idea! I really do hope you are inspired to finish it one day. It really seems like Willow and Xander would make an excellent couple in this story...
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [12 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch15" from Dragonelf
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I hope you get inspired to continue writing on this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::

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Don't anthropomorphize
computers -- they hate it.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from whogives
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its so sweet the thing about the wand and Anya
so sweet
love the story
Review By [whogives] • Date [27 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch15" from APS
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Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch15" from Darkblood
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I love it You should cont. Would like to read more of your work.
Review By [Darkblood] • Date [21 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch15" from RedDeathLV
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Nice to see you're corrected your spacing problem. However...

Your two major problems remain: Missing words, and using the wrong words.

1: You miss the occasion word or two in places, which ruins the paragraph it's supposed to be in. There are quite a few place in each chapter where this occurs.
2: You use incorrect words that SOUND like the right ones but are in fact complete off. This is a HUGE problem in this fic. Some examples:

Confusing ARE, OUR, and HOUR.
Using THERE instead of THEIR or THEY'RE.
Confusing HERE and HEAR. (This is a lot like the same confusion with BARE and BEAR)

Very good spelling, but sometimes using just a spellchecker isn't enough. If you have a prereader, I'd suggest getting another one. This one's missing everything.
Good story, it's just riddled with grammar problems.
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [3 Jul 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch15" from dmysinger
Review:
I really liked your vids but this story is cool. I wish I knew where to see your vids again I've lost the link. Great job.
Review By [dmysinger] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch15" from aussiemel
Review:
love it update soon please
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [31 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch15" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
“It was supposed to be a proper match, Watcher’s versus the real student
players. It actually evened it up quite a bit. We didn’t know how to play; they
weren’t used flying under the influence…”

ROTFLMAO!!!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [31 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch10" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Did you really need to add the first taunter to the mix?
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [31 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch9" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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"Well I'll tell you now: Caleb is not longer my number one fear,
Caleb in a thong is now my worst fear."

LOL!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [31 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch8" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I like it. Having a vengence demon after Xander really fits.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [31 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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