I do love this wonderful story and I hope that some day you decide to finish/update it.

Okay I love this fic so far I think what you have is wonderful. That said I find it horrid that you stopped at a cliffhanger and haven't updated in approximately three years! Please please please tell me that you are going to finish this wonderful fic someday.

What a great, original idea! I really do hope you are inspired to finish it one day. It really seems like Willow and Xander would make an excellent couple in this story...

I hope you get inspired to continue writing on this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::

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its so sweet the thing about the wand and Anya
so sweet
love the story

Great story,
keep up the good work.

I love it You should cont. Would like to read more of your work.

Nice to see you're corrected your spacing problem. However...

Your two major problems remain: Missing words, and using the wrong words.

1: You miss the occasion word or two in places, which ruins the paragraph it's supposed to be in. There are quite a few place in each chapter where this occurs.
2: You use incorrect words that SOUND like the right ones but are in fact complete off. This is a HUGE problem in this fic. Some examples:

Confusing ARE, OUR, and HOUR.
Using THERE instead of THEIR or THEY'RE.
Confusing HERE and HEAR. (This is a lot like the same confusion with BARE and BEAR)

Very good spelling, but sometimes using just a spellchecker isn't enough. If you have a prereader, I'd suggest getting another one. This one's missing everything.
Good story, it's just riddled with grammar problems.

I really liked your vids but this story is cool. I wish I knew where to see your vids again I've lost the link. Great job.

love it update soon please

“It was supposed to be a proper match, Watcher’s versus the real student
players. It actually evened it up quite a bit. We didn’t know how to play; they
weren’t used flying under the influence…”

ROTFLMAO!!!

Did you really need to add the first taunter to the mix?

"Well I'll tell you now: Caleb is not longer my number one fear,
Caleb in a thong is now my worst fear."

LOL!

I like it. Having a vengence demon after Xander really fits.

"I wouldn't what… oh sex! We can worry about that then."
She laughed, and let the conversation fade.

Xander got into his side of the bed. "I can't believe people our
putting the education of children into our hands."

LOL! I love that bit.


"Maybe Angel will visit." She said back to him.

"And how many times has he lots his soul now?"

That's a very good point. They should get Harmony.
She's a reliable bloodsucker.

Excellent chapter.