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Review of chapter "Silent Night" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job on the update, hoping to read more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silent Night" from Bobboky
Review:
good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Night" from Doodle
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Excellent chapter. 4,000/10


Thank you for putting up a new chapter for this!
Review By [Doodle] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silent Night" from raxadian
Review:
I want more.
Comments from author:
Well, we'll at least get to the conversation between the four witches. After that... I don't know yet.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from raxadian
Review:
This is very interesthing.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Night" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting bit of plot and cliffhanger. Thanks for continuing.
Comments from author:
Well, hopefully this cliffy doesn't last long. It shouldn't.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This is an interesting idea. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
We don't get much of Tara's backstory. Just that she's a witch and her mother was too. And a little about her hillbilly family. I was wondering who her mother was and this story happened.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Night" from AllenPitt
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I used to watch Bewitched (there wasn't much sf/fantasy on at the time, had to take what one could get). Yes, in hindsight Darren was a terrible person. Very 1950ish. But not as bad as Tara's father, yes.
Maybe T's relatives can keep Willow from going down a bad path.
One wonders what if anything they know about slayers, vampires, demons. Nothing like that got mentioned in the show... but they might not have wanted to scare Darren with such things.
* I read somewhere that there's some thought of reviving the series, with Tabitha's daughter as the protagonist. That'd be strange.
Comments from author:
I think they'll know quite a lot about slayers, etc. And they should be able to help Willow, if I can ever write that far.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from Harry
Review:
You truly got the feeling of Bewitched down well in this first chapter. Now, I know you have a lot of projects on your plate, but its been almost 18 months since you updated. How soon will we get a new chapter?
Comments from author:
Well, I was rewatching a lot of Bewitched when I wrote this. So I'm glad that worked. Unfortunately, my muse left me not long after I posted this. Luckily, I had a bit of a buffer. So, even though I haven't written much for this since then... This update is for you.
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
I must confess I don't know to much about this crossover, but nice to read either way so far. Tx. for sharing
Comments from author:
It's an old Sitcom from the 60s. Basically, Samantha and her family are hereditary Witches. They are very powerful and have the ability to alter reality with just a motion. Most witches like to wave of their hands though Samantha's favorite motion is a twitch of her nose. These witches also refer to ordinary humans as 'mortals' implying that they are at least extremely long-lived.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from Gideon
Review:
Mixing a light and fluffy sitcom with a somewhat dark drama series is quite a task. It would help explain why Tara was so nice despite her upbringing though! I can't wait to see who finds her first!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Though I think that balancing the powers of the witches in each series will be the harder task.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Jul 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from AllenPitt
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Tara might not be happy to find relatives looking her up. Imagine them showing up around the same time as dear old dad. Hey was that her brother in that ep, or just a cousin?
Great story idea.
Comments from author:
Male was her brother, (could be half-brother) Donny. Female was her cousin (on her father's side), Beth.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from ReflectionsOfReality
Review:
This is an interesting start but only time will tell how you will flesh it out.

Honestly I sort of see Sabrina the Teenage Witch as a further fleshing out of the Bewitched cosmology.

I mostly agree with your thought on all power having to have a balance but honestly I normally think of Bewitched and Sabrina the Teenage Witch to almost be exceptions to that concept.

I mean as sitcoms they follow the I Love Lucy formulas where the main characters are their own worst foils rather than some overriding external force or conflict.

Can't wait to see where you actually take this story.
~Reflections
Comments from author:
You could also call StTW fanfiction of Bewitched. :-) Then it kind of grew into its own thing.

That is a good point about sitcoms. Not sure if I can write it or not, but we'll see.
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good start to the story, I hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Should have a bit more soon. Not sure where I'm going with this story yet.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a Feeling" from (Past Donor)DonSample
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Are you aware that there was a short lived "Tabitha" TV series, that ran for 12 episodes in 1977? It starred Lisa Hartman as Tabitha Stevens, and had Robert Urich as her costar.

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0075590/?ref_=fn_tt_tt_1
Comments from author:
Aware of? Yes. Seen? No. Not taking it as canon.
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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