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Metaphysical Poetry

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rich
Review:
Very funny, and very obscure, which I suspect is the point.

minor quibble : Warren is a California kid, so he probably wouldn't say "crisps"; more likely "chips" (because what I think the English call chips Americans call "fries")
Comments from author:
Yes, the obscurity paid a large part in my reason for writing this. Still, I'm glad a couple of people got it. And thanks, I've fixed that.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Rich] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheMaskedLurker
Review:
--'{@

If I knew their works,
This would be really funny.
Target audience.
Comments from author:
It is a little obscure, it's true. But the pun works well enough even if you don't know who they are. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [TheMaskedLurker] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)vogonguard
Review:
I feel a right Herbert for reading this...
Comments from author:
Everyone needs to ascend to Herbert-hood at some point. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Past Donor)vogonguard] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ferball
Review:
In the immortal words of someone or other - "Bad doggerel; no biscuit!"

Loved how the phrase 'metaphysical poet' kept popping up & that Tara took it to the next level...
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [ferball] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TaraLi
Review:
Dante make me go Pre-Raphaelite on your ass! I'll sic Alma Tadema on you!
Comments from author:
No! Stay back, foul artist! Get thee away! I wave Saint John of the Cross at you!
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
This was hilarious. I'm tempted to go back and show it to some of my English professors.
Comments from author:
Oh, please do. I'd love to know what they say.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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