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Review of chapter "Nemesis" from Starfox
Review:
Sweet, and yet dramatic story, romantic and with a nice ending to the Dark Lord - well done!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I was in a dark place when I wrote that first chapter, I think. glad you liek the ending.

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Review By [Starfox] • Date [20 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nemesis" from wonderbee
Review:
Good section there, and glad to see Narcissa and Joyce get a happy end with each other, so well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I liked Narcissa as the mover who led to the downfall of Voldemort and her husband...

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Review By [wonderbee] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nemesis" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very nice continuation.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you liked it.

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Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nemesis" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wow, cool story!
I love the concept and execution.
I really like Narcissa Black as a character so I like the idea of saving her, even better to save Draco, Joyce and Buffy at the same time. How cool is that!

Great story!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I must admit I find the Joyce/Narcissa pairing quite fun.

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Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nemesis" from CPTSkip
Review:
YES! You saved the story! I didn't think you could, but you did. You are a genius. But this means Buffy and Malfoy, I mean Draco, are siblings, right? I hope there will be more stories set in this universe, like you don't have enough stories/series being written now. Lol! Does this mean Buffy has a magic core? And will she still become the Slayer? And is Cissi Dawn's other mother? What an interesting time-line this is.
Comments from author:
Thank you. This was my intention, just in a year's time. Lots of people seemed to be annoyed with me, so I decided to hasten it up.

Yes. Draco and Buffy are half-siblings. As for Dawn, we shall see. As for a continuation, I really need to finish some other storie first.

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Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nemesis" from Sunhawk
Review:
Well, I will say that I for one really enjoyed this story, it worked well and was well written and I think well up to your usual standard. Much as I'm looking forward to more of your other stories, this was a good read.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Of course it helps that you read the whole story. I did intend to only write/publish the second part for next year's Day of Femme slash.

Hard at work on the others even as I write this.

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Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Eh, decent, but not really up to your usual standard.
Comments from author:
Though the idea is older I had little actual time to write it, so utterly unpolished.

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Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
My god but I hate this version of Lucius. While I enjoyed the first 2/3s of your story, your ending sucked. Lucius killed Joyce and enslaved his wife and got away with it. Bad wizard! No wizard biscuits!
Comments from author:
No, the curse will only work if Joyce encounters something magical. Part two up. (Which I hadn't expected to write until 2014, eh well...)

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Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JimmX
Review:
You felt it necessary to explicitly warn about "Non explicit sex"? How about "explicit torture", maybe "non explicit rape"? And no, the phrase "references to more" doesn't say rape and torture to me. Or maybe a Horror tag?

I don't expect Romance tagged one-shots to end in stomach churning horror.
Comments from author:
Sorry about that. It was late and I wasn't paying too much attention.

I have added a second chapter that hopefully makes up for it.

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Review By [JimmX] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wonderbee
Review:
Sad ending there, and makes me wonder if Joyce did end up remembering right at the very end, and makes me hope it was a sweet and happy memory there, as Joyce had to endure a lot in the last few years of her life, even if she was proud of her daughters and the life they had, that she got a sweet memory of Narcissa to send her into the next world.
Comments from author:
Well, in canon she slowly died once Buffy revealed herself. In this tale however, there is now part two...

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Review By [wonderbee] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Well... that was a bit dark. But well written.

Poor Joyce and Narcissa :-(.

The other crossover was a surprise. I don't think I've ever read a Buffy/Good Life (aka Good Neighbors (the name I saw it under)) crossover before.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and sorry. Hope chapter two makes up for it... Yeah, I noticed that too. No teenage girls in there, thoguh Jerry and Tom as watchers might be interesting...

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Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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