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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Huh! Not bad, bordering on damn good!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it, but I'm currently stalled on this story. I know where I want it to end up, I'm just having a little trouble figuring out how to get there. Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
Seriously Fraken epic !!! How have I only found your awesomeness now ... So so need more ... Please o_O
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [8 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from MarcusSLazarus
So... the First and Scoobies are in the 'Supernatural'-verse?

Why do I suddenly have a feeling that Lucifer's going to have to ask for help on this occasion...

After all, he doesn't know enough about the First to fight it properly, but he DOES clearly operate on a 'nobody else screws with my brother' principle that leaves him kind of obligated to get the First out of Michael.

BTW, thought just came to me; is Michael appearing to Lucifer/Xander in John Winchester's body as John was his last recorded Vessel (Assuming that Anna's trip to the past always happened and always will), or is he using a different appearance (And if so, what's he appearing as)?
Comments from author:
I did think about having Michael look like John, but if he only took John as a vessel because Anna tried to stop Sam being born so that he couldn't host Lucifer, and Lucifer is now in Xander, there's no need for Anna to try and do that, so Michael will look like whoever his host before John was.

But yes, I'm pretty sure Lucifer's going to need some help with this one.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from ellf
Okay. I will say that this fic is an interesting idea. However, it is lacking depth of description which is needed to make a fic great. Your descriptions are more tell than show. When you think about a scene, don't simplify what's happening. Think about what is there. Think about what it sounds like, what it feels like. Describe it.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know. This isn't my greatest fic. Honestly, I just want the idea out of my head. That said, I'll flesh it out a little in later chapters.
Review By [ellf] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Greywizard
Definitely an interesting beginning and even more interesting developments.

Obviously, Lucifer doesn't realize that *he* is the only one responsible for the snow storm, not anyone else, and that he did it because he'd already done it. ;-)

Time travel can cause so many interesting paradoxes, can't it? ;-)
Comments from author:
Oh yeah, time travel is always fun. And confusing, but confusion is fun too.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Cdog
Wow... this is going to be monumentally bad!

Although Lucifer can pretend to be a nice guy for a few minutes before he gets too annoyed, so maybe he won't slaughter everyone.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Yes, it will be. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [25 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
Intriguing start, I'll give you that; I look forward to seeing how this develops (Particularly if the cross-portal interaction did what I think it did to Buffy and Sam)...
Comments from author:
I doubt that it has, I must say. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Runewolf
Wonderful start.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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