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The Rambaldi Bathroom.

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Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from ShyBob
Review:
I got a few chuckles out of that one, between Bob and Sydney. Plus, mad props for having Willow not use magic for everything.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
D.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from banditdoz
Review:
Hahahahaha I hope Jack get what he deserves ;D
Comments from author:
Sounds like you enjoyed it!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [7 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Bad luck the portal was looking the wrong way. Why do I get the idea they're looking for Widow Twanky?
Comments from author:
Perhaps...maybe...

What's behind the wormhole has always fascinated me, I mean anything could be there. Like why don't the SGC have their Stargate facing the other way so they can shoot the baddies in the back when they come through into the SGC?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Gideon
Review:
Well if Buffy ever wants a cheap holiday to an exotic location then her bathroom has it covered!
And hopefully Sydney won't have any hard feelings over them wiping a day or so from her mind. It would barely register on her scale of people doing terrible things to her mind :)
Comments from author:
Yep, hardly a blip on her radar.

I don't think you'd want to vacation where the portal leads to.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Hecatonchires
Review:
I did enjoy everyone jumping to conclusions based on their own worldview ^_^
Comments from author:
Always the best conclusions to jump to!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Curious. I wonder what/where that palace was?
Comments from author:
You'll find out in a few stories time...promise.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Mcspender
Review:
Yeah, if the shower can do such cool things, I really wanna see what the rest of the Rimbaldi's designed bathroom can do, oooh yeah !!.
So, it came to pass that Jack "Spy Dad" Bristow got to meet with the really heavy players, and a nice ear pulling he & his team got for being such a bunch of morons xD!.
So, any chance to see more about the surprise button kingdom??.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
The portal in the shower will feature in a story later in the series...after everyone has forgotten about it!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Himuradono
Review:
The paranoia of the Bristow family simply takes my breath away;)

If only we could get Mommy Bristow linked with the Slayer Organization it would give Jack the impression that the Apocalypse was coming.

Thanks for writing this piece.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I don't think I'll be revisiting 'Alias' because I gave the DVDs away.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Himuradono] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Thedruid
Review:
Ah, no embarrassing scene of the alias agents actually being found?

I really like the balance of your stories, not always worrying about the end of the world, bit a lot of drama and comedy anyway.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I find that too many stories set after 'Chosen' show the Scoobies all organised and not having to worry about where the money's coming from. I try for something a little different.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Mcspender
Review:
I really wanna see how the Alias team will explain this to Jack, is gonna be a really good story xD!.
Ah yeah, and they better pay the repair bill xD!!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
..or not. I can see our spies taking a long vacation in...Alaska?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from AllenPitt
Review:
So if they'd just made an offer. $2,000.00 would have done it. Of course, now they could still get it for maybe $250,000.00
Cheap.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, a nice round figure, £100,000 to add to the £125,000 Buffy got off the government for wrongful imprisonment.

But when have these people done things the easy way?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Himuradono
Review:
I almost feel like M. Burns, rubbing hands and smirking...

Please, proceed with the revenge against those agents. And remember to take pictures.

Thanks for the chapter.
Comments from author:
Oh yes indeed!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Himuradono] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Xovervore
Review:
I can see the CIA being confronted with the dreaded repair bill. Pay up now or you will be soooo sorry! Add in the pain of being beaten up by a teenage girl, it's not their best day. If they tell the truth about the Rambaldi artifact they could arrange a deal, but I have a feeling it won't be that simple.
Comments from author:
NEVER that simple!

More pain on the way for our intrepid CIA agents.

Cheers.
D.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Syd certainly seems to be jumping to conclusions here...
Comments from author:
...but I always felt that they did. To me they always seemed to go for the most complicated explanation.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Mcspender
Review:
Really, this CIA guys are reaaally something. I mean Sidney and her belief that they were cloning super-soldiers, now that's creative lateral thinking or what??.
And of course, if you can't open the door, make you own door, nice thinking there Buffy xD!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
I always thought that they took themselves too seriously while thinking up thefor things to happen.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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