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Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from FireWolfe
Review:
awesome I love this universe. Hope to see more someday.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from spring
Review:
I love this fic hope that you continue to write more wonderful fics like this one.
Review By [spring] • Date [6 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Jorrie
Review:
Awesomeness! ^_^
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [15 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nicely done, just needs to have some beta work done on it to polish it up a bit. Found a lot of spelling and 'near' right wording.

But, overall, a great story. Needs a sequal...
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [18 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Great story, I hope you will do a sequel
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [28 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I like it. It's an interesting mix.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [16 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
A very good story. I always felt that the writers/producers of Jack 2.0 failed to make the show really live. It always seemed that it could have been so much more - its nice to see an unusual cross that tries to go further than the show did.

Only two critical points. Your stories would be a lot easier to read if they were spaced out a bit more. The single-line paragraph spacing makes it very hard to read. The other point is to suggest that you spell check a bit more carefully.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [30 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from cwolf
Review:
*smacks head* Now I have to see Jake 2.0... just to understand Jake's background. lol anyhow, i love the story.
Comments from author:
Well, I tried to make it so you wouldn't...
Review By [cwolf] • Date [10 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from rob2
Review:
Very nice ending, and I'm glad you're keeping X&F together. And you're doing a sequel.

Only problem was the last chapter character encoding was totally FUBAR. ;)

Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [10 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Nightwind
Review:
0.0 ...sequel? ^-^ Yes PLEASE!!!
Review By [Nightwind] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from mytryk
Review:
A sequel is a must. Love the idea of xover w/X-Files. Do hope you write more soon.
Review By [mytryk] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from bardoftheages
Review:
sure sequel! and x-men? can`t see it. may be only logan? his first yaers after project he escaped from, but before he meet up whith x-men? hard to think why would he end up whith shadows operetions - he must hate all this things because of his past whith millitary secret recearch, but still - can be.
more, PLZ.
p.s. may be sgc? or if it`s going to be cia career for xander & faith... they can meet with webb from jag or rayan from clancys books... or born from ludlums novels... so many possabilities! ;)
Comments from author:
All very good ideas, but I haven't read those books. I don't know the whole timeline of SGC (that's stargate, right?), when it switched from Fox to cable I missed a bunch of stuff (& can't afford the DVDs). But I do have a definate idea of how it will start I'll just have to see where I can take it from there.
Review By [bardoftheages] • Date [8 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from bardoftheages
Review:
sure sequel! and x-men? can`t see it. may be only logan? his first yaers after project he escaped from, but before he meet up whith x-men?
more, PLZ.
Review By [bardoftheages] • Date [8 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Thedruid
Review:
Nice to see you taking this story up again. What is it about the black ops of goverment that make me so nervous?
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [1 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from StoneCold
Review:
I loved it. So far an excellent crossover. And I miss Jake 2.0, what a good show it was. Keep up the hard work. And if you can work it in... a little Faith/Xander ship would be nice.
Comments from author:
Maybe in the sequel. :)
Review By [StoneCold] • Date [1 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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