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Dawnie Does the Marvelverse

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Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Loved that interaction!
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [9 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Katherine 'Kate' Bishop" from SixPerfections
Review:
Just a short review.. I can't get enough of Dawn as a horndog. It's just too great and funny. Who can blame her right? :D
Comments from author:
Marvel has a lot of fine ass womens, to quote Tiny Tina. Who could resist that buffet line?
Review By [SixPerfections] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Barbara 'Bobbi' Morse" from SixPerfections
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I don't know how getting tossed into another dimension suddenly made Dawn into a horndog lady lover with no mouth filter... but its hilarious and fun as hell to read. lol that is some good comedy right there. BTW are Wanda and her brother really shacked up in canon? Probably not but I just dont know. Freaky. Good stuff so far, loving it :)
Comments from author:
If you look back at it? Dawn's only real focus episodes across seasons 6 and 7 had to do with either boys or kleptomania. And since the Emma in this universe is so gay she cums rainbows, having her DNA realigned in turn changes which gender Dawn is hot under the collar for.
Review By [SixPerfections] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Howletts" from SixPerfections
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Laura came across very Faith-like to me in this chapter. Which is not at all a bad thing since I really like Faith. It was just funny to see that contrast. Truth be told I don't know much about Laura's personality other than she is social awkward - traumatized - assassin girl. But your portrayal of her was really fun. And Dawn sleepwalking and ending up in a naked girl's bed? lol if that isn't a sign I don't know what is. Great job so far, these short chapters are fun :)
Comments from author:
I'm just having some fun setting up potential love interests for her. Maybe more than one. Toss an X-Girl in her bed, an Asgardian, a SHIELD agent, maybe Spider-Woman...
Review By [SixPerfections] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dr. Henry 'Hank' McCoy" from SixPerfections
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Just your first chapter put a smile on my face. Dawn being a huge brat is kinda cool, but I'm kinda surprised you gave her Emma's powers (at least the diamond thing). It was very nice hook for the story this first chapter and I'm for sure looking forward to reading more. BTW you have been updating very regularly and I think that is awesomsause amazing. Good job love it! :)
Comments from author:
Well, there had to be a hook. Why Marvel? Why not DC, or any non-comic world for that matter? So I added that she wanted powers. Automatically linking up with Scott, Gabriel, and Alex is far too common. Boring. So I decided to play roulette with it, stuck a bunch of names to a dartboard, and that's how I decided whose sister to make Dawn. As for the diamond/TK combo... I wanted Dawn to be a sister, not a clone. So she has common powers with Emma, but not everything is perfectly identical.
Review By [SixPerfections] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from Meneldur
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This was great. I loved how Dawn's attempts at humor and conversation utterly failed with Heimdallr. It made it all the more funny. 'Merry Sport' was definitely a win, as was the Star Wars quote. And that final scene with Dawn observing Amora being chased will stay long in my mind. Dawn meeting Kennedy and Amora, well... funnnn.
Comments from author:
Dawn, Kennedy, Amora, and Faith.

Giggity.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [7 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from CrystalBlaze
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As Heimdallr can and does see a great many things at once, he's probably a film critic.. the informed type.

It would be fun trying to get accreditation, however.
Comments from author:
He's been around since the beginning of films, too. He's seen it all.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from Selonianth
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HAHAHA The last line made it all so worth it.

Edit: Sometimes? Joe... I have bad news for you.
Comments from author:
I come up with some crazy stuff sometimes...
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from laoshi
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What exactly are these Things That Should Not Be in the Ginnungagap? Are we talking ancient and unspeakable evil o just crimes against decency?

Either way I'm sure it wouldn't be as bad for her as walking around Asgard being called Buffydóttir. Although if and when Dawn get's back she could have fun with Buffy explaining the gods think Buffy is her dad.

You get super bonus points for having Dawn use the term Merry Sport.

Fandral the Dashing? I'm assuming that's a marvel canon epithet and I'm a little disappointed in the Asgardians. Ivar the Boneless, Eric Bloodaxe. Ragnar Hairy Pants, Edmund Ironside, Harald Awesome Hair, Sigurd Snake In The Eye. Vikings had badass or just plain bat shit crazy nicknames and what do their deities come up with? That Fandral he's kinda dashing.

I loved the star wars reference. It just makes me giggle thinking of Heimdal watching it. I mean does he have a TV in a little nook at the Bifrost he can switch on when nothing much is happening.

So great chapter. Bring on the Merry Sport.
Comments from author:
Jar-Jar Binks is probably one of those Things That Should Not Be...

Fandral the Dashing is a Marvel term, but given that he and the rest of the Warriors Three are Marvel creations, it's a bit of a necessary evil. Like Amora and other supplementary characters, they don't remove or duplicate mythological characters. So that forces them to slip people into the role of The Ladies Man and such.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from LordSchmodder
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You really killed me - again - with that last sentence.
Thank you very much for that LOL.
Comments from author:
I do try my best to make people laugh.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from Markelo
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LOL I am so into this Dawn. Not it would get me out of the friendzone seeing I am not female and Dawn is underage I think.
Comments from author:
She's said to be fifteen in this, so yes, she's underage.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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wonderful, I love Heimdallr quoting Han Solo...perfect!
Comments from author:
Even gods need to have hobbies.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
Review:
A 10 for this line alone... "I'm an Æsir, not a philistine."
Comments from author:
It came to me just before I posted the chapter...
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from Tabercil
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"I have a bad feeling about this."

"…did you just quote Star Wars at me?"

"I'm an Æsir, not a philistine."

LOL... oh I like Heimdallr already. Pity we likely won't see more of him :/
Comments from author:
Well, they do have to go back to Midgard at some point...
Review By [Tabercil] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heimdallr" from Harry
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Note to Dawn: Next time you deal with the Assgardians, KNOW more about them. That way you can talk to them!
Comments from author:
To be fair, they don't exist in her original world except as myths...
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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