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Review of chapter "Sugar" from raxadian
Review:
A hunter who does not know about Sunnyhell nightlife, typical.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from Gideon
Review:
Hopefully this will lead to Xander getting some real training early on, although I'm afraid it will only increase his prejudices, and who knows where that might lead! I hope he doesn't become as bitter as most of the men here already are :(
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sugar" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Intense and well done. Again... since it is short, I'm glad you're doing it as a series.
Comments from author:
Thank you. There are one or two longer ones, but the time constraints of writing a fic a day made it difficult to expand.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from Shanna
Review:
Loved this little fic. It was so heartbreaking for Xander, trying to hide the truth. I do admit I wish there was a sequel (gives enormous puppy-dog eyes).

Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! There are several fics in this 'verse. I'm just in the process of posting them. The fourth fic will be posted tomorrow.
Review By [Shanna] • Date [22 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from RocksandGlass
Review:
Well written as a self contained work, but I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where you go with it in the series. I really like the premise and you handle the characters well.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
Very moving. I like how built up the suspense through Xander's tension. The relief at the end was almost palpable.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [18 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from Nummy
Review:
this would be an awesome AU. I wish there were more!
Comments from author:
Thank you. There is more, just finding the time to post it here.
Review By [Nummy] • Date [17 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from mokahi
Review:
Painful and lovely. I really like that you've made Jesse the connection to Supernatural.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from leonamasha
Review:
Wow. The introspection just tears at my heart strings.
Thanks for showing a Xander with depth! Ahh, gotta love Missouri.
Really enjoyed this one-shot. Would have loved to read more but at the same time am happy to let my own imagination take it away.
Thanks for this!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. There is more, but they're all short as it's part of the fic-a-day. I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sugar" from (Past Donor)Nuala
Review:
This is a great start! At least, I hope it's a start ... I would love to read more. Especially with Hunters meeting Giles - pretty sure Watchers would know about Hunters and Men of Letters. He might even know about the Winchester's bloodline. Hope you decide to write more. Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your feedback. There definitely is more, but I'm still nutting out the details as to where this will go. I can say that Missouri will change some events in BTVS, however, I won't be writing a fic which essentially follows canon episode for episode (at least for BTVS). Everything in SPN will be AU - although, I have to catch up on my episodes. I'm a bit behind. The fics will probably take place more in the SPN 'verse than BTVS.
Review By [(Past Donor)Nuala] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from Elleria
Review:
Needs more! Please? Needs to be a whole long story, not just this little bit. Please?
Comments from author:
Thank you! There will be more. I'll post another this morning.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sugar" from slmncpm
Review:
awwwwwww *hugs xander*
Comments from author:
Thank you. Poor Xander.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
OMG i don't know why but I'm actually crying right now ... I can actually feel Xander's guilt an hurt (Pain) in this story, you sincerely have a gift with portraying character emotions and relationships in your stories and I'm actually really hoping that this just isn't a one-shot, anyway love the Epicness !
Comments from author:
Awe, thank you so much for the review. This fic is particularly serious. The second one in this (at least I think it is the second), Awkward, was more painful to write than this one.

There are a total of 4 or 5 fics written and another longer one (I hope!) will be written today if my muses play nice.
Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sugar" from (Recent Donor)TheDivineDemon
Review:
This was amazing. Look forward to more of it.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)TheDivineDemon] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sugar" from Bluejello
Review:
Such a short story, but it still managed to rip my heart out and stomp all over it. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. All the stories I've written in this series/'verse are short because of the fic-a-day challenge. Basically, I'm writing and posting all of the fics in a two hour period after I finish work (hence the shortness).
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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