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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Selonianth
Review:
... I had a review, I swear I did. Then I remembered the comment about Aayla making her outfit sexier and now my brain wants to poke that with a stick.

Oh!!

lulz at Windu's stunnedness after Buffy gets pissed. Then his "It's Magnificent!" moment.
Comments from author:
Like Buffy would ever wear something like standard padawan clothes... And who better to help her than Aayla Secura (my favourite EU-character... Well, her and Thrawn)

Thank you very much for reviewing!
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chan
Review:
Well seems as if the jedi might have a chance of actually arresting the senator & minions when it comes time to do so depending on when they move on him

I likes this series looking forward to what's going to happen next.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'll try not to disappoint!
Review By [Chan] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChikaraKatherine
Review:
Very nice. Buffy always had a nack for trashing bots. The plot was good, flow was good. Over all just a very fun read. Loved the Buffy/Mace interations, the two of them were really cute. This was an exteremly fun read and I thank you for sharing it with the world.
Comments from author:
You're welcome, and thank YOU for reviewing! I really think Mace and Buffy, despite their differences, would respect and understand each other really well.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Buffy always fights better when she uses her emotions. That is what makes her the best Slayer even Faith can't do that. When Faith becomes angry or scarred, she became sloppy. Darn even Angelus and Spike can't do that.

And Mace it's not what's being the Slayer. It's what it is to be Buffy and being The Slayer. She using the Slayer part of her and her own part. Both parts together is what's making her, Buffy, a very good Slayer. Both parts are working together in a way they should. That's what nobody understood and that's why it was so important that she had normal life next to her destiny. To accept the Slayer part but not let it live her. It's a kind of balance.

I kinda like it how she can annoy Mace Windu.
So funny
very good writing all off them and I want to read more. So please write some more.

Oh I forgot. I would love to read how Mace is gone explain this to Master Yoda. Master Yoda won't believe his ears because emotions are bad.

Edit: when there is a new story. I always forget to read the top above the beginning of the story. Sooo I just read writings before the story started. Surprise I saw my name. Thank you for writing this story. I love it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it, since you're the one who gave me the idea in the first place. I'll try to write some more!
Buffy always managed to keep both the Buffy and the Slayer parts of her balanced, and since this is the first time Mace sees the Slayer part of her, he has a reason to be shocked. But he'll learn what it means for Buffy to be Slayer...

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
Review:
And I think, tis good. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Loved it! Especially the channeling of emotions yet still being wholly Light Side. I would love to see more in this series.

CT.
Comments from author:
I'll do my best to continue this series. Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IronOx
Review:
This is fun. It's good that Playful-Buffy didn't get lost in the shuffle. And flows well that they only see the Slayer when the Slayer is needed.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think it's important for Buffy to keep both sides of her personality balanced, she can't be Slayer all the time, but sometimes it is necessary to bring out the Slayer. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [IronOx] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I think this is probably my favorite so far in the series. Buffy gets to show off, Mace understands that Buffy doesn't use her emotions the way a Sith would, and they clearly respect each other.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I like it too, I think respect is very important in a padawan/master relationship, and I think Mace is one of the few Jedi who could really understand Buffy's Slayer side.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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