Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DianeCastle
Nice work! You got all the characters I had thought about as people who should pester Spike, and a few I had forgotten. I was envisioning it *ending* with Stupefyin' Jones knocking him senseless... and then waking just before dawn, when he'd get toasted while fleeing for cover.
Comments from author:
Thanks! While writing the story, I considered adding a scene where Spike tried to make a meal of Senator Phogbound, except when this vampire started the fang action on this blowhard politician, he did nothing more than futilely put the bite on a bunch of hot air.
Review By [DianeCastle
] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated