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Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from Alkeni
Review:
Hm. Very nice. I love the episode you used to tie this in - one of my favorites - and you hang some good lampshades while not being too hamfisted about it. A very enjoyable fic.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, glad you enjoyed.

D.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [1 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from Harry
Review:
I have only one thing to say: SEQUEL! I want a SEQUEL! I want to see Faith's cruise and maybe she working with Michael again, this time with her needing his help or a situation comes up that requires one to contact the other.
Comments from author:
Yep well a sequel...I've thought about it and I keep meaning to do something about but other plot bunnies keep getting in the way. I've chosen the xover material (which doesn't involve the BN crew) and I've got some ideas for a third story (making this a three story series). Perhaps when I finish off a couple of fics I've got in the pipe line I'll do something more with this...but don't hold your breath!

Thanks for reading,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Harry
Review:
Why do I see a WORLD of pain in the VERY near future for Rincon? A upset Slayer is one thing, but a Slayer who is a MOTHER, is something you do NOT want on your case!
Comments from author:
Never cross a mom...and NEVER cross a slayer-mom!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Harry
Review:
Rincon, you just made a BIG mistake! One of the girls got the license plate. She can pass that along, and bring in some heat that will make you WISH you had been caught by the police! When Michael, Faith and Faith's friend get done with you, you are going to be so sore, you'll be BEGGING to be put in jail!
Comments from author:
Oh you don't no how big a piece of trouble!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Harry
Review:
Vega, Ricon, you two are going to be in TROUBLE! Messing with Faith is NOT going to be healthy for ones life. And with this girlfriend that she has, and the neighborhood, you won't surprise her. You two are going to wish you had not messed with her. And if Michael hears about this, he's going to stick his nose in it as well.
Comments from author:
Not the brightest of people are they?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Harry
Review:
I think that Vega is going to be staying away from this area for a LONG TIME! As for Michael and his group, I think that they will find Faith a VERY interesting person, one who it might not hurt to make friends with.
Comments from author:
At this point I was still having interaction problems with the characters.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Harry
Review:
Prepare for trouble and make it DOUBLE! The Slayer is about to meet up with Michael Weston!!!!
Comments from author:
Probably...I forget!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Harry
Review:
This principle is fortunate that Faith wants to be polite to this person. The old Faith would have just taken her out then and there. Mama Faith tried to reason with her first. Now, Rosia has run into Sam, Michael and Fiona. At least the young lady is known around the Barrio. Saved her from any harm that might have come to her otherwise.
Comments from author:
This Faith is nearly 30 and a mum/mom so she's calmed down...a lot!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Harry
Review:
Well, Faith has her worries about her little girl. And I don't blame her for being worried. Now that we have met up with Michael and his team, its time to eventually have Faith meet up with Michael and his mini crew.
Comments from author:
Sort of, the problem I had with this fic was getting the BN crew to interact with Faith. If I do another BN xover there will be more interaction.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
I know that Faith has been out of the loop, so probably, when Faith went into the coma, Kennedy got called, making Willow VERY happy! And that means Faith was not in for the battle against the First. But, at least she has a group together and taking care of things in Miami. Now, when is she going to meet up with Sam, Michael and Fiona?
Comments from author:
Basically things went more or less as on BtVS and A:TS but with out Faith...to be honest she didn't really do much that couldn't have been done by other people or cause people problems!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from ChefJackButler
Review:
Very well done adaptation of perhaps the best non-arc Burn Notice episodes, and you kept Faith's "voice" consistent with Dushku's performance while you did it. That was masterful.
Comments from author:
Thank-you. I really enjoyed writing this fic and I also got some local colour from a fiend who lives in Florida, useful when you want to get a feel for a place you've never visited.

I'd like to write another story using this version of Faith but I'm being careful its too easy to rush into something and spoil it...I've not even desided if its going to be another 'Burn Notice' xover yet!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from ChefJackButler
Review:
A well-written adaptation of one of the best Burn Notice stories, and you did it in a way that makes it feel natural and not forced. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from JJDudeman
Review:
Great way to tie in one of Mike's best personas ever with a pleasant alt-Faith!! After the kids got kidnapped, I'll confess it got a bit weaker, just because all the Burn Notice team did was guard a doorway - arranging for the cleanup helped.
Also, I get Faith being OK with killing someone who needed killing like Vega, but killing the bodyguards too... I understand WHY she'd do anything for Rose, just that she's on a very slippery slope getting so tied in to being Omar's strength.
I'll repeat, this was pretty nice overall, the far and away strength was tying it together by making Mike's awesome larger-than-life persona naturally investigated by a resident expert in Faith.
Comments from author:
Yep, I agree there could have been more for Mike's team to do in the last third of the story. If I do another Burn Notice xover I'll try to be more evenhanded.

Killing the bodyguards...well I think that's what would have happened in the 'real' world as opposed to TV world. Also I wanted to show that Faith, while being a loving mother and partner was still dangerous and would do more or less anything to save the life she now enjoys.

If I make this a short series I'm going to have to decide what to do about Buffy and the Scoobies after all Faith is what we call a 'good bad-guy' and we know that unless she's having sex with the 'bad-guy' she can't let it well enough alone.

That's not Buffy basting that's how she tended to be (as her Xander pointed out on more than one occasion).

Ok, that's enough I'm beginning to lecture!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from tosca
Review:
Brilliant story. Thanks for writing and sharing. :-)
Comments from author:
My pleasure,

Cheers,
D.
Review By [tosca] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from Inoeth
Review:
Nice end to the story- it lends itself to a potential sequel, particularly with Fi. Whether its another in this series or something entirely different, i look forward to what you write next.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I did write the end with the idea of a sequel in mind, we'll just have to wait and see what happens. I must admit to feeling a little tapped out of ideas at the moment and I've got loads of unfinished fics begging to be finished.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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