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Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from ChefJackButler
Review:
A well-written adaptation of one of the best Burn Notice stories, and you did it in a way that makes it feel natural and not forced. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from JJDudeman
Review:
Great way to tie in one of Mike's best personas ever with a pleasant alt-Faith!! After the kids got kidnapped, I'll confess it got a bit weaker, just because all the Burn Notice team did was guard a doorway - arranging for the cleanup helped.
Also, I get Faith being OK with killing someone who needed killing like Vega, but killing the bodyguards too... I understand WHY she'd do anything for Rose, just that she's on a very slippery slope getting so tied in to being Omar's strength.
I'll repeat, this was pretty nice overall, the far and away strength was tying it together by making Mike's awesome larger-than-life persona naturally investigated by a resident expert in Faith.
Comments from author:
Yep, I agree there could have been more for Mike's team to do in the last third of the story. If I do another Burn Notice xover I'll try to be more evenhanded.

Killing the bodyguards...well I think that's what would have happened in the 'real' world as opposed to TV world. Also I wanted to show that Faith, while being a loving mother and partner was still dangerous and would do more or less anything to save the life she now enjoys.

If I make this a short series I'm going to have to decide what to do about Buffy and the Scoobies after all Faith is what we call a 'good bad-guy' and we know that unless she's having sex with the 'bad-guy' she can't let it well enough alone.

That's not Buffy basting that's how she tended to be (as her Xander pointed out on more than one occasion).

Ok, that's enough I'm beginning to lecture!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from tosca
Review:
Brilliant story. Thanks for writing and sharing. :-)
Comments from author:
My pleasure,

Cheers,
D.
Review By [tosca] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from Inoeth
Review:
Nice end to the story- it lends itself to a potential sequel, particularly with Fi. Whether its another in this series or something entirely different, i look forward to what you write next.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I did write the end with the idea of a sequel in mind, we'll just have to wait and see what happens. I must admit to feeling a little tapped out of ideas at the moment and I've got loads of unfinished fics begging to be finished.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from AndreaMaine
Review:
Loved this story and I wonder do you have more Faith stories in Miami?
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

As for more, it's something I'm thinking about but I don't want to commit myself just yet.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from Tempi
Review:
Great story as usual. I look forward to reading the next one from you.

BTW in chapter 8, in the scene with captured Jackie (& Rose), Jackie crawls over and cradles her own head in her lap. I think you meant Rose's head.
Comments from author:
Probably, I often find that people swap places without my permission!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
I'm really, really, disappointed that Faith didn't kill Mike, Sam, and Fiona.
Comments from author:
Well maybe next time.

D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from CPTSkip
Review:
This is one of your best stories.

I loved how your Faith has matured and simply grown into being a great mother. Teenaged Faith would have slaughtered each and every one of the Bad Guys. I was surprised she only blinded the bastard and didn't castrate him also. Of course if she had ripped off his putrid junk he would have probably bleed to death before he could help solve the other crimes he commited. But then again, a blind child molester is just not a long term survival prospect in any prison. I see loooong term solitary for the bastard.

Great story and I hope you return to this universe someday as Cat, Rose, and her friends are some of the best OCs I've ever read. Well done and now do it again. Lol!
Comments from author:
Well thanks for that. Some of the credit must go to my e-frien Matthew who advised me on things Florida.

I've got lots of things on the go, plus far too many unfinished stories. So, I don't know when or if this verse will be back. However, it seems popular so maybe I'll move it up the priorities a bit.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
Nice punishment for Rincon, veeery nice.
And Mike got a good deal with Gillroy, thanks to Faithy scaring Gillroy, coool!.
I really want to see what comes out of Fi talking with her family in Ireland.
I like this Verse, I really like it =).
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Cheers, as for more in this verse, we'll see.

D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Chapoter?

Nice ending - seems about right for Rincon, provided that people don't start feeling sorry for the poor blind man...

Nice ominous "Buffy catching up with Faith" vibe from Ireland. But it's been a LONG time, maybe Buffy doesn't care much any more. Or maybe there's a problem developing that has nothing to do with Buffy - Banshees? Leprechauns?
Comments from author:
That's the...erm...oh I give up I'll change it later if I remember!

Buffy not care? She's probably still got a bee in her bonnet about 'evil' Faith. I mean she only killed two or three people, not like Angel!

Well, the end was a set-up for if I decide to write some more in this reality.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from AllenPitt
Review:
Is this 'Devon coven' that the council /Giles used to use? Probably not, if it's in Ireland... but somebody has taken an interest, that's usually not good. If they know that there are now lots of slayers then Faith maybe being a slayer wouldn't be that interesting though, surely?
I liked the resolution on the child services thing. So Faith is ok on that front, barring anything more happening that the school notices.
Comments from author:
Devon's quite a long walk from Ireland, and yesit was the Devon Coven.

If I decide to develop this verse, we'll see where we go with every thing, at the moment I'm in two minds about it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapoter Nine." from ecsnorway
Review:
Heh. Fun little story. Got further plans for this 'verse?
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

That's a big, fat maybe...I've got some ideas but I don't know if I can run with them...of course Florida is near the so-called Bermuda Triangle...that might work!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ecsnorway] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Inoeth
Review:
oh man, you keep on building up this story in all kinds of great ways. I can't wait. To quote the band drowning pool- "Let the Bodies Hit The Floor!"
Comments from author:
Thank-you,

D.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Stormrider
Review:
Rincon, you just made the biggest mistake of your life. Now Faith knows why Mike's here and he's not a demon (Loved the smack down she gave to Gilroy and Mike) but Rincon and Vega's got Rose, and hurricane Faith is on the loose. Now Sam and Fi's shown up with Cat. It must've been really hard for Faith not to go and beat Sam and Fi into liquid form with Cat there. Now Faith, Mike and Co are going after them. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if after all this mess with Faith, Mike and Co get along and maybe work together occasionally? (I still would love to see Faith and Fi get along)
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

As I've had a good reception to this story, I might expand on it to make a three story series. I had lots of ideas I didn't use in this fic, like Faith and Fi becoming sorta friends. Rose beating Maddy at poker or some such game. I'll see how it goes bearing in mind I've only got so much time to write in and that might be getting cut down soon!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Cutiepie
Review:
I've never seen Burn Notice, but I am really enjoying this latest story from you. I always like your stories, for that matter.

Reading this, I kind of get the feeling that you aren't particularly familiar with Spanish. That's OK, I'm not exactly fluent myself. However, I do know that you ought to use the feminine article "La" instead of the masculine "El" when you have Faith called "El Elegida" or rather "La Elegida" (The Chosen). And I believe that you want the noun "puta" (whore, prostitute, harlot) instead of "punta" (point, end, tip, corner).

I'm looking forward to the next update, waiting to see how the latest mess gets straightened out. =]
Comments from author:
You're right about the Spanish, I'm reduced to using a translation program.

I knew about adding the 'A' at the end of the word to make in feminine but I didn't know that included words like 'Le' becoming 'La' I shall file that away for future reference. As for the other, you're probably right, I just get it into my head to spell things a certain way, like yesterday I was typing a characters name completely wrong and thats after I'd very carefully checked the spelling!

What can you do!?

Cheers, glad you enjoy my stories.
D.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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