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Unexpected Paths 2.0 Second Chances

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Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from PandorasKnot
Review:
I know this was written a long while ago - but had to put up a public thanks. A rather crappy night made all the better by the last line of the last chapter. Thanks for an unusual and entertaining take on the BtVS world.

But maybe next time... give a gal a little warning? Do you have any idea how painful snorting a popsickle out through your sinuses can be?
Review By [PandorasKnot] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
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you say you have already written UPaths 5 but have not posted it anywhere, when will you?
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [18 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from Coldhands
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Great story, great series, want more.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [27 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from jessie
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Heh, I liked it! Made me smile.
Review By [jessie] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from (Past Donor)Mari
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While the whole thing was entertaining and well-written, I particularly liked the scene where Oz, Xander, Robert, and Andrew were drinking and coming up with slayer slogans. It just really clicked well--the way they had to keep explaining what they were talking about to him, and then under explaining, and then reexplaining before he adds another movie to stealthily watch later. Wonderful.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snowy Cleveland" from ganainm
Review:
Haha, the hellmouth is in Chardon. I would have guessed Parma. Probably right underneath Parmatown Mall! You could have put it underneath Franklin Castle, as well - I'd believe that :-)

And ... Gads, but I have grown to love the freezing of Lake Erie. Driving in the lake effect isn't fun at all! Not that I'm living there at the moment, can't say as though I miss lake effect.
Comments from author:
Ah, Lake effect, currently being experienced right now. Franklin Castle would have been fun too, sorry I didn't think of it. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [ganainm] • Date [9 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from Jerri
Review:
This was well worth the read.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snowy Cleveland" from whirleeq
Review:
Okay, you know waaaaaaaaay to much about Cleveland. Local? Have relatives here? I myself am a Cleve Hts. girl, and love the Maple Fest in Chardon. They have this booth that sells hot maple syrup and a stick, and you spin it around in a little cup and make your own candy. Yum...

Anyway, on to the review. I am loving your story -- stories, actually. I started by reading 'Buffy Bodyguard', and then ended up here. Love your use of a minor SG1 character. Ties up a loose end nicely.

--julie
Comments from author:
Congrats! You are the first one to figure it out. Yes I am local (sort-of), which is why 2.0 won't be going much further. It would be way too easy to stick in some of the local characters into the story. I don't live in Chardon, but I do work there.
2.0 was a sort of inside joke. Since Chardon was the snow capital of Ohio, it just seemed like a better place to have the Hellmouth instead of Cleveland.

And ironically enough, I've never been to the Maple Fest.

But if you're talking about the Geauga County Fair, I'm there.
-Thanks for your lovely reviews, here and elsewhere. Your comment about professional writing just made my week!
PaBurke
Review By [whirleeq] • Date [11 Nov 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Erectile Dysfunction?
That's cool. LOL
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [13 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second-Hand Clothes" from Thedruid
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Can't write in crongolicol order? HEheh, I've done a bit of that. You get an excellent scene in your head, and write it down, but then you need to connect in into the story. It helps me if I write down a scene, then just start writeing at some point, eventually leading up to the scene. Though don't get too attached to any particluar scene, if the charcters demand to do something else when you actually write up to that scene, do the something else, it will usually fit better.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [12 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snowy Cleveland" from PaulineE
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Ooohhh - didn't see this update - wasn't expecting it right in the middle between 2 & 3. Going great, can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [PaulineE] • Date [13 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Paths 2.0 Second Chances" from LadyRowan
Review:
This was an entertaining story! I'm looking forward to reading future installments.
Review By [LadyRowan] • Date [29 Jan 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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