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Unexpected Paths 3.0 Sudden Chaos

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Review of chapter "Second Glance" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing as always and an enjoyable sense of playfulness.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from breve
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i found this story on the recommendation of a friend.
she was right, i loved this!
any chanceyou're coming back to this series?
Review By [breve] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from stahchild
Review:
Noooooo!!! There's no more to read??!

This has to be one of the funniest series not featuring a member of SG1 as a lead, i've ever read! And you redeemed Makepeace. Love it!!
Review By [stahchild] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from Thedruid
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It's a shame you never worte more of this series. It's both serious and funny!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from mpsshadowmaster
Review:
*giggles like a madwoman* I love this series! I want to see more! I have a single problem! You spelled Feretti's name wrong, badly. Well, what happens next?
Review By [mpsshadowmaster] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from FireWolfe
Review:
OMG this series is fantasitc. I hope there is more. I would love to see A Robert /Faith Pairing it would be a great mix.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from Geyer
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Add me to the list of readers who greatly enjoyed the entire series and would love to see more in this universe, if the muse moves you. You handled the rehabilitation theme very well, and the humor was excellent. Much as I love Jack, sometimes he really needs to be shaken up.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Paths 3.0 Sudden Chaos" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
more please.... Redheads, and Brunettes and Blondes Oh My...

Please do some more... This is so funny... And touching and actually gives Makepeace a personality. Kewl.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from jessie
Review:
I don't think I've ever read a story that was kinda based around Robert Makepeace and his redemption from the life of NID evil. Anyways, I liked it. All I really have to say is, is there more? Because I really want to read more!
Review By [jessie] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
Poor, poor O'Neill. His team is going to have jokes for years. So, if you should (please?) decide to continue, will the two teams actually meet? Robert having to explain his situation--without actually explaining anything--could be very interesting.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from (Recent Donor)LordMesron
Review:
More, more, more!!! I really enjoyed all 3 stories. You have got to continue this series.
Review By [(Recent Donor)LordMesron] • Date [7 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Paths 3.0 Sudden Chaos" from (Past Donor)windeetree
Review:
This is so funny, I'm hoping you do more.
Comments from author:
THank you. I get this story out and fuss with it every so often. I hope that I will have another chapter some time
Review By [(Past Donor)windeetree] • Date [26 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
Very enjoyable. You have a good feel for the fun side of both shows.
I noticed in an earlier chapter that you said you'd finished 5.0 and were waiting on finishing 4.0 to post both. Can I encourage you? :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Glance" from purrfus
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This is sooooo good. You have a really interestingly twisted sense of humor, and even more intriguing - you are able to translate that into the written word successfully. I saw a note that there would be more - goody!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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