*giggles like a madwoman* I love this series! I want to see more! I have a single problem! You spelled Feretti's name wrong, badly. Well, what happens next?
Add me to the list of readers who greatly enjoyed the entire series and would love to see more in this universe, if the muse moves you. You handled the rehabilitation theme very well, and the humor was excellent. Much as I love Jack, sometimes he really needs to be shaken up.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Paths 3.0 Sudden Chaos" from DeepBlueJoy
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more please.... Redheads, and Brunettes and Blondes Oh My...
Please do some more... This is so funny... And touching and actually gives Makepeace a personality. Kewl.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I don't think I've ever read a story that was kinda based around Robert Makepeace and his redemption from the life of NID evil. Anyways, I liked it. All I really have to say is, is there more? Because I really want to read more!
Review By [jessie] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Poor, poor O'Neill. His team is going to have jokes for years. So, if you should (please?) decide to continue, will the two teams actually meet? Robert having to explain his situation--without actually explaining anything--could be very interesting.
Very enjoyable. You have a good feel for the fun side of both shows. I noticed in an earlier chapter that you said you'd finished 5.0 and were waiting on finishing 4.0 to post both. Can I encourage you? :-)
Review By [draconin] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This is sooooo good. You have a really interestingly twisted sense of humor, and even more intriguing - you are able to translate that into the written word successfully. I saw a note that there would be more - goody!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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