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Damned Protocol

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice one shot!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tosca
Review:
LOL! Awesome.
Review By [tosca] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from docfeng
Review:
need more in this world
Review By [docfeng] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
I am so disappointed that this frisky, charming story is a one shot! But still, Kudos plus for the resulting angst for the SGC and its minions. They needed someone like Dawn to shake up their claustrophobic pressure cooker mindset. Besides that, Dawn on missions off planet would be a pure delight to read. Was there some kind of matchmaking machinations going on? Space Monkey and Dawn!
Review By [PATM] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
That would sooo happen!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
The "mixup" could have been someone's idea of a test for new applicants.

The entire time she was waiting, one of the shrinks was watching her.

Edit: "Damned Protocal". I think you meant Protocol.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun read, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rich
Review:
Not to mess up your plans, but this cries out for a sequel.
Review By [Rich] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Seems like Dawn made the right decision here. She shouldn't get kidnapped or locked in the mountain if she isn't in the mountain at all and they will still be sending her some interesting info to review!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hope the chocolate basket and the spa helps her change her mind.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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