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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Starfox
Review:
Great idea indeed! Very entertaining - and revealing. I am looking forward to see Dumbledore's plans unravel.
Comments from author:
This is the kind of situation that is just begging to be abused, and I intend to do just that. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Oh this is just to wonderful for words. I am eagerly awaiting more to this wonderful wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. More to come as my muse dictates the further misadventures of Malfoy and Snape. ;-)
Review By [twlight] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)justjoanjm
Review:
LOL Very good. I'm surprised that JKR didn't make more use of polyjuice in the books, or any sort of glamour. I enjoyed this.
Comments from author:
JKR came up with a humungous number of great plot ideas, but she never seemed to follow up on any of them properly.

That's when we fanfic writers step up to the plate, and show her how it should be done. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)justjoanjm] • Date [27 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leb
Review:
this is good, I cant wait to see what will happen next
Comments from author:
Thanks.

And just think about what some of the idiots in the Wizarding World and at Hogwarts deserve, and you'll have an idea of what Sirius is going to be doing - only multiplied by a factor of a bazillion. ;-)
Review By [leb] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from superfan
Review:
Well, that's one way to get them to grow up!
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed. Make an example of one of them, and the rest will quickly fall into line. ;-)
Review By [superfan] • Date [12 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shanna
Review:
Awesome. I always knew Sirius had an inner Slytherin. It looks like Barty isn't the only one in disguise at Hogwarts that year. I can't wait to see what a Marauder will be willing to do wearing the greasy bat's face.

I also wonder just how much fun Kreacher is having harassing a captive Snape.

Thanks for writing, and I hope you definitely do come back and add more mischief to this tale. Take care!
Comments from author:
Yes, Sirius was originally supposed to be a Slytherin, but did pretty much the same Harry did years later, and argued his way into Gryffindor.

And there will be more added to this, as and when my muse commands. ;-)
Review By [Shanna] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wonderbee
Review:
Heh, that was a neat move on sirius's part there, and makes me see the Marauder he was in the past, than the beat down man he was driven to be.
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed. *My* Sirius can actually still use his brain after enduring twelve years in Azkaban, and he's using it to right all of the wrongs he sees. ;-)
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oakheart
Review:
You had me at 'barely adequate master'. :D

Actually, your hook got in the opening sentences, but the line merited an
additional sort of accolade. Entire concept earns an 'O' with Distinctions.

SD
Comments from author:
Thanks. Appreciate your reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed it.
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slmncpm
Review:
bwahahahaha I LOVE IT!!!
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent setup!

Kreature being useful and enjoying his work always brings a smile to my face.
Comments from author:
Yes, that is exactly the kind of work Kreacher would enjoy. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
Oh, this is going to be good .. excellent first chapter...
Comments from author:
Thanks.

The potential for Snape, Malfoy and Death Eater abuse is unlimited. ;-)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
Awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wdlwbt
Review:
Very nice. Thanks for sharing :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. And you're welcome. ;-)
Review By [wdlwbt] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun with a Sirius that has his own ideas. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm showing a much more proactive Sirius in this story.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
So much fun.

Is Snape in stasis or parted out for potion ingredients?
Comments from author:
I could actually argue for both options, so I'm just waiting to see what my muse decides in the next parts of this. ;-)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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