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Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from UntitledAngel
Review:
I love this story and how you connected Buffy into the lives of Sebastian and Kathryn. I'm kinda hoping you've written (or will write) a one shot when Willow, Oz and Giles come to town or a one shot (side story) about Sunnydale hearing from Buffy.
This story has definitely got me wondering what else you've written :)
Comments from author:
LOL. Thanks, I've considered add an epilogue to the story but just haven't found the time.
Review By [UntitledAngel] • Date [21 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nana Knows Best" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Review:
Very awesome…! :) I like this chapter, as it’s really neat, as well as very inspiring. Plus, as “nana” is French for “grandmother”, I’m beginning to like the character of Buffy’s grandmother, too; she sounds like a very neat lady, as well as really phenomenal too. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I loved the challenge of writing 2 SMG characters in one story. Loved writing Nana, and she is the results of several of my favorite ladies in my family.
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [14 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from DesireeStorm
Review:
Well that was rather interesting on how you blended the two fandoms together. Well done and many thanks for sharing your creation.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I had allot of fun with this one. Kathryn is such a fun character to mess with.
Review By [DesireeStorm] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from JinaSolo
Review:
A very good story!

I understand that this is an ending point. However, it would be nice to have an epilogue to see their reactions.

What about Faith? Can they save her also?
Comments from author:
Thank you. I have considered writing an addendum to show everyone's life unfold. Faith was not introduced into the storyline when Buffy yet. My hope was that without Buffy already in residence that she would have a created the life she wanted and needed as a hero, and not a victim.
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [1 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nana Knows Best" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
It really is a very fine tale. Your writing really brings the characters to life.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from bradsan
Review:
I love the entire story but those last chapters are the best.

Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
You're more than welcome, and thank you for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from lilacsandroses
Review:
This was a good story even though I never watch Cruel Intentions, but this story I like. It's a shame you didn't include the Scoobies P.O.V. when they learned of Buffy's true hertiage along with her wanting her friends and former watcher close to her. Also, loved to see Xander's reactions to their plans. Any chance you might include this? Please!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I have no plans to include this to the story at this time, but may consider adding an additional chapter at some later date.
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nana Knows Best" from WolfWriter
Review:
Glad to see that Edward wasn't a complete schmuck for what happened with Kathryn.

And what kind of mother sets up her husband to sleep with her own daughter? Was she not getting any from him? I hope not; God only knows what kind of STD she might be carrying. Same for Kathryn. ICK! The two of them are worst than Jack Harkness; fucking themselves all over New York and the Hamptons. EW!

This was a nice ending for everyone.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And, I just tried to give some other reasons for why the characters acted the way they did. Not that it excuses their behavior.

Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from AllegraCousland
Review:
So glad that this is complete as it is such a wonderfully diverting read. Thank you again for writing and posting it~
Comments from author:
You're more than welcome, and I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Review By [AllegraCousland] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from Misty
Review:
*clapping* that was a goooooooooood story, thank you for sharing it with us
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Misty] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Nice smooth handling of Kat and her mom. Glad for Seb's sake that Edward was drugged into that scene.
Comments from author:
Thanks love, glad you liked it, and as always appreciate your reviews.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off With Their Heads" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
What? It's over! I'd say too soon, but think it may be just right. I have to say that Buffy's cousin is lucky she held back. Heck, she's lucky her grandmother held back. But I think I really liked how Edward was redeemed and Tiffany got hers. But even more, I really liked how Buffy got some of her friends back. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing this story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost From Sunnydale Past" from DragonBard
Review:
So, you decided to use Season 1 Cordelia (pre-Prophecy Girl) instead of the Season 3 Cordelia who had some character development and growth and was no longer just the whiny rich girl, huh.
Comments from author:
I used a mix of the two. But, more of the first than the last.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nana Knows Best" from WolfWriter
Review:
Well, Cordelia's big mouth strikes again! She nearly cost her father and her family everything they own, because she couldn't stand to see Buffy being better than her at anything.

But then, she was a spoiled Daddy's girl who really didn't start to mature until after she left for L.A. I just hope that her father pays his taxes this time around, otherwise, they're STILL going to lose everything!

I suppose there's no Dawn in this. GOOD! I couldn't stand her as a character; she was a whiny brat with no redeeming values other than her talent for languages.

If she's going to come into this at all, make her Giles' daughter. It'll be easier for the others to deal with her anyway.

And I really, REALLY want Kathryn to be exposed for the drug addicted little slut that she is.
Comments from author:
Promise no Dawn in this story. I have a hard time writing Dawn, and have never really cared for the character. Felt Joss only created her because Kristen Sutherland (Joyce) was leaving the show.

Next chapter should answer your questions on Kathryn.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost From Sunnydale Past" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Cordy is a pale - ghostly pale - imitation of Kathryn. Actually, when I think about it, she's barely like her. Kathryn stabs from behind; Cordy is in your face. Kathryn is all about the vices; as far as I can remember, Cordy didn't do drugs and presumably was a virgin (at least onscreen) until she was in LA. But they both are bitches who like to rule their schools, so that part holds true.
Comments from author:
Its the way the treat people where they are similar. They both felt as if all should bow down to them, sexual proclivities aside.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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