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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Will Ronnie end becoming a Therianthrope?
Comments from author:
Nope. She's a professional and won't risk a confrontation with a shifter.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Your stories make me want to go on a genocidal crusade against all vamps. Kudos and thank you! XD
Comments from author:
It's awesome I can evoke such strong feelings in a reader. A high praise.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MagnusXXN
Review:
I wouldn't mind a shot Richard. I swear, there was just something about him that pissed me off. For like the entire series. And Gabriel, surprised he wasn't wearing his freakin gauntlet. He has an entertaining bad guy, if stupid. Who says, "Hey I plan on raping you to death, "then gives Anita silver knives to defend herself.

Not all the weres are bad people. Just the ones stuck under a vampires thumb, usually. Watch out for Raina, she seems like the type to try and dry hump Xander's leg like a dog in heat. Update soon.


): )
Comments from author:
I actually forgot about the gauntlet. It was a spiked one, wasn't it?
I know, Richard was kind of irritating, but I still think he had one of the most consistent characters in the series. Though, he was exasperating as hell with all the whinny - angsty behavior we saw.

I actually like the St. Louis wererats as a whole, Rafael and Anita's bodyguards were a nice flavor for the series as a whole. Wererats will see some coverage in the next story.

For now I'm preparing to write a One-shot named 'Miami Hit' about vampire mafia in Florida. There is also one crossover I want to write. It would be Smokin' Aces crossedover with (Wttroyl) Welcome to the rest of your life story, featuring Edward and Xander playing CIA sponsored cover to the FBI.

PS. I finished chapter 4 of the second story for the Wttroyl series.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
The quarterback is toast! Ah, the poor misunderstood doggy onna have bad day?
Comments from author:
Xander is compiling a Stasi-esque Archive of his own. Will it see use? Maybe.

Thanks for the review.

PS I finished the second chapter for the second story of this series.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
Cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AnFan
Review:
I'm back in a happy place with your story line again. I wasn't too happy after that last story. It looked like the entirely fun time I had been having reading this series was ending because it was becoming too dark. Meaning that it looked like it was going into the territory of a story that likes to beat up on it's heroes to make them look somehow even more heroic. Always made them look more pathetic in my mind when they kept getting beat and, as Austin would say, lost their Mojo.

Can't wait for you to put up a new offering showing what you have in mind for the ideas put forth in the canon story. I hope your muse can come up with some great twists given how you've made changes to the canon plotline. The major characters that came into the story new from outside will obviously be little changed, unless you want Xanders's impact to twist them. But will the characters that were favored by a now dead master vamp still be in powerful positions? The answer is, most likely they will be, given that it's never a good idea to change the entire organization when taking over. However, it will be interesting to see how you choose to twist events given that some of the characters may not be able to get away with the same things under the old regime. Could be lots of fun had in the future.

Here's hoping you have lots of time to indulge yourself in your hobby of writing ;) And thanks for the new chapter in the series.
Comments from author:
I benched Xander for the last arc of the story, because I wanted it to be an Anita arc. Besides I wanted for someone to get a drop on him. Believe me he'll be a bit more paranoid and careful in the second story. That shot in the back was a wake up call for him. And to add insult to injury, it was done by a thrall. :)

The supernatural politics of the St. Louis will be featured in the next story. Fun, fun, fun.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I'd think he'd be more interested in scanning for people who are thralled or mage touched.
Comments from author:
Well shit, I think you found something of a plot-hole. ;)

Hmmm, it looks like I'm going to have to write another One-shot with thralled and folks who have some magic in them.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SilverWave
Review:
Cheers :-)
Comments from author:
Mazel tov :)

Thanks.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sandi
Review:
Richard and Gabriel. Richard maybe should keep his job but Gabriel....
Comments from author:
Bingo. :)

In canon Gabriel got killed by Anita. We'll see how it pans out this time.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lordamnesia
Review:
Glad to hear the next story is already going! Keep up the excellent work!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TTrunks
Review:
I know I mentioned this before.... But it seems like your Xander is making me root for the evil things that want to kill him. He knows people in his word are racist ass heads. So he's going to make a literal "Whose who" of people who are already living in constant fear of being found out, and thus basically invading their personal rights? Not only that but by having something like that that exists he's basically asking for trouble....

What's next, selling a list of closet gays an anti gay camp runner? Or maybe the local priests? Giving the local back peoples names an social security numbers to the KKK?

I was mildly annoyed at Xander torturing vampires to get a lit of the Maters of cities, then giving them to some government stooge ((He's dealt with Adam, and Twilight...)) But their is no way a list of were's wont' bite Xander. Possibly literally.....
Comments from author:
Yes, You mentioned it. I remember it clearly.

Yes, he's making a 'whose who; list.

He's asking for trouble? He was shot in the back. He's already in trouble.

And this one? " What's next, selling a list of closet gays an anti gay camp runner? Or maybe the local priests? Giving the local back peoples names an social security numbers to the KKK? "

WTF? Seriously?

I'm writing a story where people hunt vampires. Vampires hunt people. And lycanthropes eat people and each other. It's circle of violence. The universum this story exist is a Horror Urban Fantasy, if you haven't noticed.
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)ElzaCBoe
Review:
wiiiiiiii
new story..... me likes muchos ;P ......
more more more more :P
Comments from author:
One more One-shot will be added to the series. It will be a hunt action - type of story.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)ElzaCBoe] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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