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Review of chapter "Unclear on the concept..." from Cordyfan
Review:
Poor Harmony... Doomed to be thick as pig-shit and half as useful for the rest of her immortal existence...

Very funny little short - I liked this one.
Comments from author:
hahahahahahaahahahahahahah.... wow. tell us how you feel, how you really, really feel!!

Thank you my dear. Means a lot coming from you.

Blue
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unclear on the concept..." from DarthTenebrus
Review:
She doth whine overly much, I'll warrant, and to be left out of ribald antics doth darken her count'nance.

She doth hold now her womanhood cheap as Chosen and Champion do frolic in their happy crypt, oblivious to the spectator whose thighs now do moisten with womanly angst, if ever undead thighs did moisten with living passion.

Pity now the forlorn creature who must needs ignore the vile craving of her sex...poor Harmony.

I know, I suck at iambic pentameter...

Edit/Reply: Meh, what can I say? I did like reading Shakespeare in high school. Did you know someone finally wrote a Shakespearean adaptation of Star Wars?! Verily, A New Hope, 'tis called. Read it, too. I can't explain my reaction to reading it; you'd have to read it yourself and make your own judgment.
Comments from author:
You're way better at it than I will ever be! I'd never even attempt it!

Harmony is very pathetic, the poor dear!!

What an awesome review!!

:-)

Blue

EDIT: sorry, just saw your response... that's fabulous. will have to find it! thanks :-)
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unclear on the concept..." from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Amusing drabble.
Too...much...blonde...in one story.
Harmonious prose.
Comments from author:
I guess you could say it was Blonde on Blonde... I could ask where the harm is in that, but you already know...

heh.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unclear on the concept..." from CPTSkip
Review:
For some odd reason, possible because your story is funny, I can't stop giggling at your silly little story. I thought you did an excellent job with each of your characters' voices. Which made it even funnier.
Comments from author:
Glad to be a source of mirth. Thank you so much for your compliment. It means a great deal coming from you.

Mirthfully yours,

Blue
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unclear on the concept..." from RevDorothyL
Review:
Heh-heh! :)
Comments from author:
:-) Thank you!!

Blue
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unclear on the concept..." from Mcspender
Review:
Weell, at least Harmony now knows where she stand xD.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Me thinks the lady's lucky to be standin'! Thank you so much.

Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unclear on the concept..." from DianeCastle
Review:
Nice! But I thought Harmony said the only boy-girl-girl threesome she'd be up for was Charlize Theron. :-)

Did you get the title from TV Tropes?
Comments from author:
I must have missed that. (the Charlize Theron one, I mean.) Was it in the comics?

Nope, came up with that all by myself. Sorry it wasn't totally original!

Peace,

Blue
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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