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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AkashaDrake
Review:
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [30 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from gaulty
Review:
Enjoyed your story
Review By [gaulty] • Date [23 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work, whatever it may be.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Review:
The reviews all say it's a great story, but I couldn't finish it. Too many errors and misspellings. Not horrible ones, just too many.

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Review By [Oxnate] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Great story, would love to see what happens when they get back SGC and Xander meets Hammond and Kinsey.
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Difdi
Review:
Awesome story, but you REALLY need to proof read it. Almost every other sentence has one or more errors, mostly properly spelled wrong words (feel instead of fill, for example).
Review By [Difdi] • Date [23 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from midnight
Review:
Loved it
Any chance of a sequel
Comments from author:
No clue. My Muse tells me what to write and right now she's barely speaking to me
Review By [midnight] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from notWorthy
Review:
Awesome. That was a pretty good way of getting him out, and an interesting way to boost him without giving him any powers.

Turning Jonathan into Gandalf seemed a little forced, but I can understand wanting to not leave any threads loose.

It'll be interesting to see how a Xander that can relate to all of the main characters at the same time will interact with everyone. Though I'd think he'd tend to favor Jack personality-wise.
Review By [notWorthy] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
a marvelous story with very interesting twists ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lisagrace
Review:
I enjoyed this. Xander with Jack, Carter and Daniel-that is a very evil combo. Would love to see a sequel or continuation. Sounds like Xander had a few ideas on taking out Kinsey, doing evil to the gou'ld and driving everyone nuts.
Review By [Lisagrace] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Selias
Review:
Kind of weird that they just took him along, without saying anything about it.
Review By [Selias] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Very nice story.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL! Fun little one shot.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Malu
Review:
I would love a follow up!
Review By [Malu] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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