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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Mcspender
Review:
Oh you... mean evil author, you you. I think I know what do you got planned for Alison xD!!! :P!!!.
Yep, I think that Alison is in for some extra time pay, a biig fat cheque only for this day alone indeed xD!!.
I really wanna see how Alison returns to her time, but well, weddings are cool xD!!!.

Cool fic, see ya!!!.

E.T.A.: Weell, I don't know, I'm just guessing xD. Besides, one version of Jack is around that time too, altough he's playing the human popsicle game, just like Steve Rogers did ;).
Comments from author:
...you do?

I'm actually really curious as to what you think I have in store for Alison. Because I happen to know what happens to Alison next and how she returns home, and, to be completely honest, I don't really think it's predictable.

So... yeah. If you could let me know what you think is going to happen, that might actually help me make things clearer or more mysterious in upcoming stories. Reader feedback is always appreciated.

Not to fear! You'll get more Alison in "Defenestration", and you'll find out what ultimately happens to her in "Cheaters".
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Mcspender
Review:
Well, If Alison can't do some fast time travel, I think she can go the slow way, after all, Jack did it.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
It doesn't work so well when you're aging like a normal person. She'll be older than her parents, by the time she's done!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Keshkreature
Review:
Gah! You can't just leave it there! Even if I know you're super-fast with the updates!
Comments from author:
Just updated! Sorry, I had an orchestra rehearsal, plus I have to buy 500 bars of hotel soap!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [1 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from jaycatt
Review:
>She blinked. Realizing. "No internet." She looked up at Benton. "Wow. Where do you lot go to read poorly written Harry Potter slash fic?"

Marry me?
Comments from author:
Hehehe...

I was hoping someone else besides just me would get a chuckle out of that.
Review By [jaycatt] • Date [30 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mcspender
Review:
A trap for the third Doctor. Let's see how does Jack defeats this particular foe :S.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from EnergyBeing
Review:
Getting closer and closer but never actually escaping? Sounds like Sutek. Except it was Four who did that, not Three... and Sutek wasn't actually eating anyone, just keen on destroying the universe. Maybe it's a relative of his?

Alternatively, it sounds like the 456, only that doesn't quite make sense.

Anyway, it could be something completely different, of course. But I'd like it to be Sutek.
Comments from author:
Just you wait for the 456, I've got a whole thing in the works with them.

Not Sutek, sorry, but I will try to come up with a Sutek story at some point in the future. Since you requested it.
Review By [EnergyBeing] • Date [30 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DofEire
Review:
This chapter has just become one of several reasons why Three is in my top 4 Doctors... :)
Review By [DofEire] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Mcspender
Review:
CIA bad xD!!. At least Alison got to know the Brig, and that's a plus.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I kind of miss the Doctor shouting at the Time Lords for screwing up his life in the new series. Especially when the Doctor shouted at the CIA.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CaptJohnHart
Review:
Well there goes Jack saving the damsel in distress.
Comments from author:
Poor Jack knows Buffy's gonna kill him if he doesn't get Alison back. Seriously.

He must be under so much pressure.
Review By [CaptJohnHart] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)BuffyFan
Review:
Fantastic.

In the early 70's I came across this Doctor Who show on my local PBS channel and was instantly hooked.

The Third Doctor (Jon Pertwee) is my favorite non-reboot doctor.

And again, thanks for all of your fantastic, well written, gripping and funny stories. I am always looking for the latest update.
Comments from author:
Why thank you!

I worked hard to get the Third Doctor's voice right. He's hard to do -- you have to make him fatherly and kind, but at the same time also belligerent and irritated. He's a very sharp contrast from the New Who Doctors.
Review By [(Past Donor)BuffyFan] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mcspender
Review:
Well, at least Alison can say that she knew London in a very cool historical period... the hard way, but hey, London is London xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LallaBelle
Review:
Did not expect it to be UNIT waiting on the other side.

This Doctor would be Three, right?
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Time travel, the hard way xD. Poor Alison, but well, at least she had quite a cool tale for her first day at work xD.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Oh, her first day isn't over yet.

It's just been extended by about -40 years.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LallaBelle
Review:
Okay this definitely looks like it'll be interesting!

Can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Why thank you!

I hope you like the rest!
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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