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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Five" from Lydia
Review:
Well this is another good story, pretty interesting, the major complain about it is that some chapters don't feel like they are chaining up efficiently, you have a chapter where something happen, than the chapter end and the next chapter feel like its starting on a completely different idea so it could use some clearing up and making it so chapters can chain into one another easier. Otherwise I would love to see this story being completed, its been a few months since the last update and it would be nice for it to be finished.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Lydia] • Date [12 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Five" from raxadian
Review:
Okay, they are already demi-gods and have several planets to rule, what's next?
Comments from author:
Someplace interesting and exciting probably.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Four" from raxadian
Review:
They are already demigods, at this rate they will become Elder gods in a few years.
Comments from author:
Or at least have the power of gods... :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Three" from raxadian
Review:
Messing up with dead? This won't end well.
Comments from author:
Generally speaking no.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Two" from raxadian
Review:
Well, they went really crazy this time.
Comments from author:
Yeah... it happens. :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty One" from raxadian
Review:
If the HP really has no gods, damn.
Comments from author:
It might :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from raxadian
Review:
What if they make the Charmed ones the new Elder gods?
Comments from author:
There would be worse gods... :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Nine" from raxadian
Review:
Strife herself is behind all this, right? They have messed up every world that wasn't doomed already save for the FF world.
Comments from author:
I'm sure she's laughing her ass off. :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Eight" from raxadian
Review:
Damn, a world made of Excalibur?
Comments from author:
It hurt a bit :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Seven" from raxadian
Review:
And the gods wanted them in that world... why?
Comments from author:
Because they're crazy?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from raxadian
Review:
Probably things are already going weird.
Comments from author:
Yeah, things tend to get weird when you've got magic.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from raxadian
Review:
Halloween upgrades?
Comments from author:
Basically the Halloween spell.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from raxadian
Review:
Well, they could upgrade the joke into something useful.
Comments from author:
It's possible.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from raxadian
Review:
Oh, hunting snakes?
Comments from author:
Maybe.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad that you like it.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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