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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [8 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Tir
Umm - is Seo the baby Time Lady that was sacrificed to make Slayers?
Review By [Tir] • Date [11 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mcspender
Ah, nothing like a little ambush & massacre in the morning to clear the sinuses, and getting rid of some moronic enemies. Well done Ria, you're learning the secrets of the Trade =D.

So, the Keys are gonna travel; well, at least Dawn will feel a little bit better traveling with her niece, instead of being the unwitting pawn in Ria's very long con.

Cool fic, see ya =)!!.
Comments from author:
Yep, they're off to explore the universe!

One of the things I like about Seo and Dawn is that, even though they're so different in terms of speech, mannerisms, knowledge, etc, they are still also kind of the same person. So you'll see them both be inclined to do the same kind of thing, even though they approach it differently.

Look forward to it!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from potterinu
So does this mean that even if she finds the perfect place for herself or falls in love or something Dawn can't stay in any place she visits with Seo? Potential sad outcome.
Comments from author:
Yes, unfortunately, it does mean that. Which could, potentially, be bad. Although, since Earth is a stabilizing influence on her, she will always be stable on Earth at any point in the past or future. That's good, and means she can stay in another time, as long as she stays on Earth.

Keep in mind, though, that if Seo gets killed or taken off-planet while they're time-traveling on Earth, Dawn will be stable staying where she is. But she won't be actually able to time travel back to her own point in time (which would cause instability). She'll be stuck.

If the same happens while they're not on Earth... well... that's a whole other issue...

In terms of good news, though, Dawn never thought she'd be able to time travel anywhere. And Seo's given her a way that she can do that. Also, Seo can regenerate, which decreases the probability that their travels together will cause the universe to fall apart.
Review By [potterinu] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Mcspender
Well, at least it was not a bomb :S.
And that thing was a ring... damn, those demons have being reading Tolkien too much xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Seems more like something the traditional demons would do, huh? Maybe the Tech Demons read Lord of the Rings on their Kindle...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Mcspender
Yeah, Realpolitik has that bad habit to kill romance in weddings.
Let's hope that things can go a little bit better in the day... and poor Dawn doesn't end with a nervous breakdown.

Of course, that nervous breakdown can be stopped with the proper application of violence... like kicking the butts of a lot of Knights Of the place that's Turkey now ;).
Now that would be a wedding to remember, demons, slayers & aliens united in a brawl to fight a common foe: Wedding Crashers xD!!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
You'll be very happy to know that, due to your enjoyment of the Knights of Byzantium in my stories, I now have the Knights of Byzantium playing an extremely crucial role in the season finale story for Season 3. Dawn's not a kid anymore -- let's see how she takes them, now!

Hehehe, that would be funny. Wedding crashers indeed.

Just wait until you see what happens. I bet you'll like it.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from ellf
Gah, poor Ria. Poor Allison. Poor Seo. Poor Buffy and poor Dawn. Just piling things on everyone over and over and over... they need something good for them. Something amazing.

Writing as always is impeccable, and this isn't as soul-wrenching as the Doctor getting tortured fic... either of them... but I want something good for everyone. I want a real happy ending.

You're a great author and we feel for your characters. Keep it up.
Comments from author:
Well, if it makes you feel better, things work out really well for everyone at the end of this.

In fact, we'll get a bunch of happy endings for stories in this particular Season. So look forward to that.
Review By [ellf] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mcspender
Ah, weddings, I love them xD!.
Poor Ria =(. I hope she can get some very need therapy, she really needs that help.
That's the bad thing about being invisible, people forgets about you, so Dawn's gonna have to work hard to get noticed again.

So Buffy voluntaried??. Weell, that's what she gets for being such a nice person xD!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
It's very Buffy -- volunteering for something she hates without really thinking, just because she honestly feels for the person who's asking her. Lucky for her, Ria will later return the favor in a very large way (if I ever find time to write that story).

Well, you know from Bringer of Death that, eventually, Dawn is going to stop working for the Slayers and instead wind up saving the world with Ace and her friends. Looks like it's the beginning of the end for her, there.

Trust me, Ria has a really good reason for being upset about those scars. You'll see in the chapter I've just posted -- they're the reason her wedding is ruined.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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