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Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Harry
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Xander, the Alpha of a Pack eh. I wonder how the Mayor and Glory would have reacted to that!
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Allyssiandra
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Love this story and am hoping that you feel inspired to write more in this universe, Alpha Harris. What ties can be forged with the Hale pack and the Stilinskis and Xander's pack. What would change with the fire, and Peter. Just an idea.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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A good and somewhat logical retelling of an old tale. Could really use a sequel!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [6 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from (Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane
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Oh . My . GOODNESS!! I'm so in love with this xover ... So Fraken Epic!
Comments from author:
XD Aren't you glad I pointed you in this direction. ^^

Happy you love it. And thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [18 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Nuphar
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God I love this show you seamlessly weaved the teen wolf and Buffy together and if you ever write more you can follow either time line Buffy verse now with added werewolves or the Teen wolf verse with badass Alpha Harris! I want more! I want both! I love it. Very Well Done.
Review By [Nuphar] • Date [13 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Zaion
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This is seriously a very well done piece. I kind of wish there was more to it, perhaps we can hope to see a continuation in the future? Because really this calls for it.

-ZI
Review By [Zaion] • Date [11 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Shinkan
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Excellent Story!! I love how you wove this story together...I hope you do a sequel to this story..... ^_^
Review By [Shinkan] • Date [11 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from lillyb
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That was wonderful, please tell me this is squeal bound. I can only imagine what a difference pack Scooby could make pre-fire to the Hale family.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Rod
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Nicely done! You have some very good characterisation there, very believable interactions between the various principals. I can't think of another Buffy/Teen Wolf crossover set this way round, with the teenage Scoobies meeting the pre-fire Hale pack. You handle it very well, so congratulations.

Much as I'd like to see the adult Scoobies come back to Derek, I'm not entirely sure it would work. In particular, a Xander who is fifteen-odd years older and a Alpha probably isn't going to be so much like the normal-guy goof we know and love, and that stops being fun surprisingly quickly for me.

Anyway, well done again!
Comments from author:
Ah ye of little faith. When I write Xander all grown up he's not all that different from Teen Xander. Xander tends to be what the people around him need him to be. Whether that's someone strong and ready to give out hugs, or a goof who can brighten your day...or someone who can show you how to operate a rocket launcher and set up explosives.

Thank you for the comment. I am glad you liked it. ^^
Review By [Rod] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from mharris
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Excellent Story!! There should definitely be a sequel to this story!!!
Review By [mharris] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Studyofchaos
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Great story, well written. Thanks.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from RHatch
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This needs a sequel
Comments from author:
LOL This is the first in a new series.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Loatroll
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Really good! Thanks for the great read. Hoping for more in this verse :-)
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Serin
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Wow, I am really sat that this is only a one shot, are you going to add more stories at a later date, or is this it? I really enjoyed reading this, kudos!
Review By [Serin] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burden of the Beast" from Chaoskitten
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Is there going to be more to this? I could only imagine how Xander would react to the Hale fire.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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