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Review of chapter "Cover Art and Teaser" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
Review:
Wow! I totally did not expect to love this story as much as I did! You have no idea how surprised I was to open your story and just get engulfed in its expert storytelling. Please don't get me wrong: the only reason I was so surprised is because of the title of this fic. It put me off even looking at it until I was bored one day and just decided to look at it based upon its crossover series. And damn, do I wish I'd opened this story sooner! This is one of the most engaging, thrilling reads I've come across, equal to and surpassing my favorite published authors, such as Heinlein and Card! Your writing is superb, and your characterization is so indepth that I actually find myself believing in these characters, and rooting for their success! Your descriptive prose paints a picture of the environment that is even more detailed than the television show, giving us a look at a Sunnydale in not only three dimensions, but five (temporal and emotion-evoking). You, sir, have quickly and resolutely have become one of my favorite authors, and I look forward to reading the rest of your work. Bravo!

Sorry to come off a bit of a fanboy, but, well, I am now.
Comments from author:
Cool. And thanks. ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Oft From the Scantiest of Materials..." from DieselDriver
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Woo Hoo! Go Sgt Benjy. LOL I knew a kid who milked cows by hand from about 5 till I met him several years later. You REALLY didn't want to get in a handshake war with him. I'll bet the same would apply to Sgt Benjy.
Comments from author:
Yup. Bet he had forearms like steel cables and a grip like a vise, huh?

I used to get some of that effect going up to my Uncle's ranch for the summers. After milking, churning, running the cream separators, exercising horses, and working the cattle dogs, and turning the ice cream churns all summer, I'd be buffed pretty good by the time I got back to Dallas for school.

ETA: Oh, and thanks for all the reviews, man.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the World's a Stage..." from DieselDriver
Review:
And in some hellish hell dimension, the soul of Ethan Rayne is saying "Oops".
Comments from author:
Either that or he's standing in front of the Universal Embodiment of Chaos looking up and going, "What? Wait, where am I? And why am I in this handbasket?"
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lights, Cameras..." from DieselDriver
Review:
I always liked Kendra, she was much hotter than Buffy. I was not happy when they killed her.
Comments from author:
Me too. She had potential for a lot of stories. Unfortunately, we're a minority - a LOT of the fanbase vocally didn't like her, and wrote in about it or posted on it online.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Book II teaser and cover art:" from garrycooper
Review:
Wowser!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Book II teaser and cover art:" from Harry
Review:
I WILL be waiting for the sequel. This is a war that is going to be fought and fought for the safety of humanity.
Comments from author:
*grin* Thanks for all the reviews, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll start posting the sequel soon. (Early next week, I think)

Man, you pretty much read the rest of that straight through the night after I sacked out. Marathon reading session - thanks for hanging in there.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Close Encounters of the Worst Kind -" from Harry
Review:
Well, now we see the future. A future where the machines and the hellmouth forces are working together. And its a very dark and nasty future. Time to bring the forces that survive together to grow, rebuild and retrain for the strike against their foes.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermaths I – Put My Guns Down on the Ground..." from Harry
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IRREGULARS! FALL IN! WE HAVE A RESCUE MISSION TO UNDERTAKE! ONE OF OUR OWN HAS BEEN TAKEN HOSTAGE! WE WILL RESCUE ONE OF OUR OWN! HOORAH! No one messes with the Irregulars if you know what is good for you!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reset, Take Three – Command Decisions..." from Harry
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I think that JOyce and the others are finally starting to realize that while these youngsters may be child sized, they are NOT children anymore. No, they are adults. And that means its time to treat them as such within the laws of the land.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reset, Take Two – Small Soldiers" from Harry
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Benjy has earned a LOT of respect and admiration from her parents for bringing these kids in safe and sound for the most part. And Aura earned some respect from Benjy from the way she handled things as well. Now, we need to figure out about Xander and Cordy, and how they are going to deal with the Terminator.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little Damn Heroes, Sir..." from Harry
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Well, the spell has worn off. But not all the effects left with the spell. And that means that there is STILL a lot of problems out there, the biggest being The Terminator!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Escape Through the Never-Never..." from Harry
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Well, since Kendra flat lined on the table while being worked on, we will soon have THREE Slayers, with Faith now having been called. Now, lets see about getting the kids OUT of there!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Siege at Avalon Isles, Part Four –" from Harry
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The spell may only last till midnight, but there is a lot of damage that can be done between now and then. And lets hope that things work out for those involved. There are going to be a lot of sore people, if not dead people, by the time that the spell ends.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Siege at Avalon Isles, Part Three –" from Harry
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For once, Stein is doing the right thing. Cordy and the Tech Sgt may end up dumping the car for a different one, but at least Stein is doing the right thing. And the meeting music: WE WILL ROCK YOU/WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS? Someone likes Queen!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Siege at Avalon Isles, Part Two –" from Harry
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After this battle, Benjy is NOW starting to sound like a regular drill Sergeant! And you do NOT want to mess with them. And as for Ethan's: Time to find that shop and see if the spell can be broken.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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