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A Jedi, a Mage and the Troubles

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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Difdi
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> "Boy up Tony.”

Oh, that's one hell of a zinger...
Review By [Difdi] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Dragonwolftiger
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Said what she meant, meant what she said, Ziva in the drivers seat would cause the Pope to drink. *snicker* very good story I look forwards to the next chapter.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from texaswookie
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Audrey could have some trouble (no pun intended) with Gibbs if he senses that she's at least partially responsiblefor the Troubles.
Maybe I missed it but shouldnt Tony have tried to compare himself to Han Solo? I meaan McGee is Luke Gibbs is some badd ass cross between Obi-Wan and Mace Windu and Qui-Gon.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from jtkirk
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Fantastic, thanks
Review By [jtkirk] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from VillageOrchid
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Fun and cool chapter.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from DarthTenebrus
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I suspect the conclusion approaches presently; McNeill's grief has been released, but the source of that grief, having possibly been identified as a misogynistic Marine Corps drill instructor, has yet to be confronted. Gibbs, being a Marine himself, and now a magick-wielding NCIS Special Agent, I fear will need to tread most carefully now, lest his anger at Gunnery Sergeant Harrison's mistreatment of his recruits send him over the edge and into the Dark Side. True, McGee's the Jedi and Gibbs is not, but the fact remains that both harness powerful esoteric energies to do what's required in the service of humankind. As with the Spider-Man Peter Parker, those who possess great power must assume great responsibility in its use, else they become corrupted by that power. Perhaps a call to the Jedi Temple is in order?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [26 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from DofEire
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Rut roh, Gibbs! Time to get McKenobi back on the scene... :)
Review By [DofEire] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from DarthTenebrus
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Oh bollocks, this looks like a situation where the Force might help out a lot; if what I'm reading is accurate, Gibbs is about ro become another victim of the unfortunate Sergeant's Trouble.

Move your ass, Probie!!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from VillageOrchid
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Really good. Gibbs can sense the vengeful magic, but he isn't sure if he can shield himself of dissipate it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from AllenPitt
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Big problems, and Audrey hasn't even returned yet. Since they have a human lie detector, she won't be able to get away with claiming not to have A's memories, but that will make things worse, as Pain Girl & the Garda will insist on her killing Nate immediately...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from kaekae
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just to let you know. cause of this story, I found Haven. I've watched every ep now. :D
I had thought the show had ended, so I was kinda disappointed it ended on a cliffhanger and I havet to wait to see it.
I also reread/scanned the story to see how it fits in the Haven story line. :D
Review By [kaekae] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from DieselDriver
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Your writing is so good that it's a real shame you divide it up into such small giblets for posting.
Comments from author:
The next bit will be a lot longer and will (hopefully) be up by the weekend.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from DarthTenebrus
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Man should have said "Force be with you" ...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from djhardim
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Sorry to hear of your recent problems. Hope things work out.

I have a feeling that Anya could probably tell them what they need to know. This sounds like a vengeance demon's work.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [16 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Dreamweaver
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Anyone else old enough to remember this little tune?

....do-de-doo-dooo-do-de-doo-doooo.....There is nothing wrong with your TV, welcome to the.....
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [16 Feb 14] • Not Rated
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