Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

A Jedi, a Mage and the Troubles

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from Harry
Review:
Well, this story has been settled. Now, its time to get back to the Jedi. You left the Terran Jedi with us hanging over the possible relationship between Xander and his pupil. How about a update, PLEASE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [7 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Harry
Review:
Some people just Do not learn! When someone says that they need to talk and re examine things, you do that! You don't go crazy and pull a gun out! That is a sure way to loose what, if any, credibility you had!
Review By [Harry] • Date [7 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Harry
Review:
One minor point on this very well written chapter. When you clear a round that is in a automatic, it is referred to as clearing the chamber, since the round is still in the chamber, and has to be removed by moving the slide back to eject the round that way.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Harry
Review:
Time for some answers people. ITS SHOWTIME!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Harry
Review:
First off, I feel sorry for whoever did this to this town. When the team gets back to Norfolk, EVERY record is going to be searched for answers! And as for Ziva: Why do I get the feeling that Tony is in TROUBLE?!?
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Harry
Review:
Tony may like to give Tim a hard time, but he is also not afraid to give the man a compliment when he does something right! And this clown of a Marine DI, is going to be getting a visit from Gibbs VERY soon! Trust me on that!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Harry
Review:
BLAST! Just when Gibbs was getting through to this guy, TROUBLE rears its ugly head! Time for a mixture of Magic and Jedi to calm things down enough to try and get some answers.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Harry
Review:
If ANYONE can get through to this man, its Gibbs. A man who has lost his own wife and a former marine, he CAN relate!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Harry
Review:
Collins? As in the Dark Shadows Collins Family? If that is the case, then that would explain why she became a Slayer. With a distant relative being a Vampire, but one who was trying to end his curse. And the other information that Giles got has explained some things as well.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Harry
Review:
Well, Abby is taking the idea of Tim being a Jedi with a flourish. Shipping him the equipment needed to build a training module is great. Now that the team is here in full, its time to see what is going on, and how to deal with the problems in Haven.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Harry
Review:
*CHuckles* THese people wanted to know about McGee? Gibbs told them! He didn't tell them everything, but he gave them something to think about.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Harry
Review:
Well, at least one of the officers knows about Sunnydale and what that town is about. Which means that its time to come clean about Haven.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Harry
Review:
*Eyebrow raises* A THIRD case? OK. Time for people to start coming clean about Haven and what is going on here.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Harry
Review:
Sounds like this detective DEFINITELY knows more than he is letting on. But this incoming call may mean that the interrogation will have to be put on hold.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Harry
Review:
Well, at least Gibbs and McGee know that Pernell knows. That makes it a lot easier to talk about things. But this Barn: It raises a lot more questions that need to be answered.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 10 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking