Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Try not to let WCSII's review affect you. He seems to have some sort of Entitlement Complex. Write what you can when you can. This is fairly well written and I look forward to more as well.
Review By [Oxnate
] • Date [25 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WCSII
You know, I've always taken authors that claim that they'll "write when [they] want to write" to be that the authors really meant, "[they] am too lazy to put any effort into the story that [they] started, no matter how interested you are in [their] story. If you want to read a finished product, go buy a book. Otherwise [they] got no obligations to continue, much less finish any of [their] works. So buzz off!"
Which is were I obligatorially remind them, that as the author they've started a story, posted it for others to read, and since they were seeking the attention of readers praise, are thus bound by author/reader privilege to continue their work. Preferablly in a timely fahsion.
And thanks to authors like MistofRainbows, and DianeCastle, other authors don't have the excuses of work, school, or real/personal life for slacking. Mist has both an active personal life, and school, and still gets nine to thirteen pages at twelve point Times New Roman font at least once a week. Diane has kids, college and a job, and still writes fifteen to nineteen pages at twelve point Times New Roman Font, twice a week.
So, in short, if you're not going to try writing, you shouldn't post; if you're willing to make an effort at least be honest about why you're late.
That said, while I don't know this particular series being crossover with BtVS, and the first page is simply intro filler, it does seem like an interesting story could come from this. If you're willing to make the effort of writing this story, I'd like to read it. I've already added it to my story tracking.
Review By [WCSII
] • Date [24 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IrFane
Interesting. Feels like a preview, but hopefully more will come. :-)
Review By [IrFane
] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Geak
This is a hilarious concept. I hope you continue with it.
Review By [Geak
] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from removedauthor
Interesting beginning chapter to the story. I look forward to the next one.
Review By [removedauthor
] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]