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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
I really enjoyed this story, but I have to be honest that I felt a sense of betrayal at the end reveal.

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It is not that I dislike the character, it is that other than the lack of Buffyspeak and lack of discomfort with guns or killing, she seemed pretty much like Buffy to me, and nothing like Kennedy. You never really made any effort to discourage that or to give any real sense of mystery about her identity. And having her go by "Betty" most of the time seems to reference a similarity to "Buffy".

Also, I think the story is far too long for it to work as a sort of reversal of expectations like that. Typically, those types of stories are short stories, not novella length like this is.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [2 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from raxadian
Review:
Well yeah, but besides the Buffy speak you did write her a lot like you do your Buffy stories.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Nine" from raxadian
Review:
I knew this was gonna end in a Mafia war.
Comments from author:
Which was the whole plan in a nutshell.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Eight" from raxadian
Review:
I guess that's why you should never meet your heroes.
Comments from author:
Doc was never one of her heroes. Just somebody she admired.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Seven" from raxadian
Review:
By how little Natcht showed around lately Savage will think he is still injured. Good, it helps to keep the secret of superpowers for a little more time.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from raxadian
Review:
Savage would steam if Natch hires her.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from raxadian
Review:
Smart, but probably will end in a Mafia war.
Comments from author:
That may be the plan...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from raxadian
Review:
So she gets to hear him before he hits it big, cool.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from raxadian
Review:
She really needs to start hitting the books, doesn't she?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from raxadian
Review:
Wait, she is really gonna use that cover?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from raxadian
Review:
Good that things turned well so far.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from raxadian
Review:
Uh Oh, trouble.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from raxadian
Review:
Well, will the Doc be there?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from raxadian
Review:
So, Natcht angels?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from raxadian
Review:
Well, I wonder who that woman will talk to?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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