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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
Review:
Wow, this is actually good! It's rare that I see A Hermione!Slayer fic that is actually well written and well thought out. Kudos, my friend Oliver Twist it.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I have put a lot of thought and quite a bit of research into this. :) I wanted one that felt realistic instead of trite, and focused on something other than YAY it's a party because now I'm special! Because Hermione was ALREADY special and could handle her own.

I'll stop rambling now. Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger
Review:
Hmmm... after season 5 perhaps? Hermione possibly being the often-ignored Slayer who may-or-may-not have been called after Buffy's second death?
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing!

It's actually set during the. Glory arc. Hermione arrives in Sunnydale just around the time Joyce dies. Good idea though. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
Review:
This is interesting. Either becoming a slayer brought her some past-slayer memories so she just thinks Dawn is her sister.... or the monks took an existing person when they created "Dawn, Buffy's sister" and erased her from her old life. I'd like the latter a lot, as a story line.
How Hermione became a slayer... Either Faith just died, or Kendra did, and Hermione was called instead? Hm. the Council would know a new slayer had been called, but in the wizarding world, she was probably blocked from their locator spells. Might at most know she's in California now? Maybe even her name...
I like that this is post Deathly Hallows.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :)

I can't tell you if your ideas are right because spoilers, but I love that it has you thinking.

The timelines were just right for post DH fun, so I rolled with it. :)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
So glad to see that you've continued this. I look forward to your regular updates because this story has so much potential. I hope you'll explore both the travesty that is the wizarding world as well as the emotional drain that is life in sunnydale for our btvs heroes.

More soon, regardless of where you take it, please.

Blue
Comments from author:
Thank you!

It's been a little tough getting started, but I definitely plan on getting more up soon. It's a labor of love and I want to share it. :)

Hopefully my next update is a lot faster than this one was.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Mildly promising. Why is Hermione a Slayer? Since Sunnydale is THERE, it's not after the mass calling.

Also, I *VERY* much doubt anything short of absolute betrayal would break HP/HG friendship.
Comments from author:
You'll have to continue reading to find out. :) Its definitely something a lot of thought was put into.

And I agree, but Hermione doesn't. She is incredibly affected by what's happening, and her judgement is definitely compromised. I hope you keep reading.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ChaosLady
Review:
Facinating.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :)
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosLady
Review:
This is good, please continue.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review! I certainly plan to continue.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SSanchez
Review:
Good start, I'd read more if you posted more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. :) I hope to have more up soon.
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
That is one heck of a beginning! Looking forward to seeing what comes next. I'm not afraid for Hermione... as long as she brought her wand with her, I think she'll be just fine!

Blue
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I hope you'll enjoy what is to come!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Okay, so Hermione is off her game, disoriented, confused, ALONE... in SUNNYDALE!

*pictures bushy-haired brunette with sign around her neck saying 'All you can eat buffet'*
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. It certainly would look that way, wouldn't it? ;)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChikaraKatherine
Review:
Hermione is racist. Then again most of the wand users in the HP universe are extremely arrogant and egomaniacs. Who need to be taken down several pegs anyway. They are so stupid as well. I mean really, they know of all the possible ways people could get away with crimes. Yet they jump for the easy answer. Never thinking to dig deeper. But at least she wasn't a complete prick about it all. Plot idea is interesting. I can easly see where this search would break her up with Ron. Harry however I guess I would expect more from him. Still its a good way to get them out of the picture. A short first chapter but it does set the stage for some interesting happenings. Dawn is with Buffy and company. At least I think she is. Which means Hermione meets Willow. Most bad ass non wander user in the States.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I don't know that she herself is racist towards wiccans, necessarily. I do get what you mean though. But she is definitely ignorant and the Wizarding World as a whole is in this canon does look down on them. This is a prejudice she doesn't necessarily agree with, but one she's naturally expected to. The fact of the matter is that when her magic failed her, this so called "lesser magic" gives her a chance. I think Hermione as a character has found a lot of things wanting with the WW in canon, and the treatment (in general) of muggleborns and house elves for instance, is going to push her break more. I really want to play with that. I really hope that all made sense!

As it pertains to Ron and Harry, they're not completely out of the picture just yet.

And yes, Dawn is with Buffy and company. Hermione will meet her intellectual match in Willow, discover some interesting things about herself, and find a place for herself where her personal values and morality won't be called into question based on ancient history and archaic law from the WW.

Thanks again! Sorry for the novel in my reply!
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting. Looking forward to seeing how you move this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jazzibear
Review:
A good and interesting start. More, please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm working on the next bit now, hope to have it up soon.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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