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Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from ShyBob
Review:
Poor Xander. Oh, wait--lucky Xander. Well, it's Xander as usual, anyway. A demon and a serial wiccan killer in one day...that's grim!
Comments from author:
The ideas for the next 'Xander' story are even grimmer!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from EasterCat
Review:
I really enjoyed this, aside from the spelling errors. I'm glad you'll be bringing the couple back at some point.
Looking forward to the next fic.
Comments from author:
You're referring to the chased/chaste thing...right? Just one of those things, normally I'd spell it right but that day I just couldn't think.

I don't normally write Xander, not because I don't like the character but mainly because I don't think I can do him justice. I have another story in the planning stage and as soon as I get these zombies off my back I might just get down and start writing things!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Yes, but the notes are helpful hints too. All in all, a very satisfying read. It was good to see that Xander may not be as not-a-scooby as he thought.

I did love the whole "Slayers getting too corporate," thing. That phone answering scene was hilarious.
Comments from author:
The phone thing came to me as I was writing and I just went with it, glad you enjoyed.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from cwolf
Review:
While I'm sure a "chased kiss" would be an amusing scene to write. I'm afraid it's Chaste
Comments from author:
Somehow how to spell 'chaste' went clean out of my head. However, the idea on a 'chased' kiss might be amusing in a new fic.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [1 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Now I'm actually feeling sorry for Xander - never a good sign...

BTW, you said "chased kiss" where I think you meant "chaste kiss"
Comments from author:
chased/chaste, yeah I know but what's an 'ed' between friends.

Feeling sorry for Xander? Yeah I know what you mean. As far as I can remember I've never come to the end of an episode of BtVS and said, 'Aw, poor Xander'.

Perhaps we're getting soft in out old age?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [1 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Mcspender
Review:
...Whisky Tango Foxtrot, you outdone yourself this time dude xD!!!. I mean, of all the people, Xander had to fall for Dexter Morgan's little sister, who by the way is witch hunter xD!!!.
Ooooh boy, I hope Charlotte is sane enough no see that Willow is a good witch :O.

Cool fic, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Sane? You want sane? I'm sorry but you've come to the wrong author!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2." from Mcspender
Review:
And today's lesson is: never trust porn movies, because the lonely house wife might be a killer monster :O.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
At least she hasn't got a German or Dutch accent.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2." from misterwhy
Review:
hahaha.
the curse of the demon magnet strikes again.
anya must be laughing her head off
Comments from author:
Yep, 'the curse' strikes again!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
oops...

Serves him right!
Comments from author:
Oh, that's not fair. After all isn't this normal behaviour for building contractors?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2." from Himuradono
Review:
Oh come on, everyone knows that men scream manly. It's only the rude people around that claim that it sounded like a little girl's scream. I'm surprised that Xander hold out on her for so long. She was coming a bit strong - pardon the pun.
Comments from author:
Hey, look: you're having 'relations' with an attractive woman and she suddenly turns into a life force sucking fiend from hell...I think I'd scream like a girl and I'm rough and tough and strong by heck!

Seriously, I'm sure i remember Faith saying that Xander screamed like a girl.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Himuradono] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Remember: For the extra "Ancient" song/chevron, parody "Intergalactic"...
Comments from author:
not sure I understand this comment...heck! I'm not proud, I don't understand this comment!

But cheers all the same,
D.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
So sweet Charlotte has a secret, I wonder what that is xD??.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
But of course, how could a girlfriend of Xander NOT have a dark secret.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Himuradono
Review:
Okay, I want to read more of this. Good work, held my attention and I liked what I saw. Good exposition and dialog.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I don't often write Xander so its nice to here when someone thinks I'm doing an OK job.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Himuradono] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Really needs a George Formby soundtrack, and/or the Bob the Builder theme. There used to be a BtVS vid of Xander with that theme mashed with Eminem, which was quite fun, but I can't find it on line any more.
Comments from author:
All the best vids on You Tube vanish!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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