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Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from demonichellfire
Review:
Agreed though that's Marvels' fault. In the Original Days of Future Past arc Logan confirmed that it was a future version of Kitty by scent and posture alone. Something that he could easily have done here as well.
Comments from author:
Am I correct in assuming that you are referring to the fact that not even he was capable of telling who the real Peter Parker was? If so then you are right that was another major fail on the teams part...what was Marvel thinking? One would think with all they have seen, done and experienced they could tell that a mind switch had occurred, I mean it has happened before, hell in Dark Reign it happened to Steve with the Red Skull, He was even impersonated by a Skrull and at first glance they new he was an imposter.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [3 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from Amberdrake
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This is quite addictive you know. I've just one request. After this story is done, could you please repost it with the typos fixed? They seem the type caused when word processors autocorrect. But wait until after the story is done. I'd rather have new chapters than corrected old one. I'm looking forward to chapter 10.
Comments from author:
I actually do that before I post any story on any site since I know exactly what you mean, I don't know why they mix up the words even after I go through the whole thing twice to make sure I don't have this mistakes. Still I will try harder to make this a lesser occurrence.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [2 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from Valy
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Really Like this story and it should be really interesting in seeing how they act as a team and how they affect the world.

thank you for creating this story
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and I hope to keep it going long before I choose to retire.
Review By [Valy] • Date [2 Jan 15] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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Glad to see updates on this. I really look forward to seeing this story play out.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [1 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from CageFire
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Nice to see new chapters. I am rather glad though that we're finally past that part of the story. Now we can finally get to the interesting parts.
Comments from author:
Yes, this was the first hurtle I needed to get past and I am glad to have passed it with pleasing results. The next one comes in the forms of the aftermath and how to get them out of Sunnydale and onto the scene where the DC heroes and Villains get a look at the new guys on the block.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from JediKnight
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Great work on the new updates, I hope to read more soon. When might you get to the "YJ" crossover aspect?
Comments from author:
As soon as I can figure out a way to get them away from Sunnydale and into the DC scene properly and with a bang.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Jan 15] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from grd
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Bet the PTB must be a bit upset at these changes to their plans.
Comments from author:
PTB, The First, Jasmine...oh I am not doing ruffling feathers friend, I aim to piss off a lot of folks.
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Jan 15] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from demonichellfire
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love to see Otto get creamed by Strange
Comments from author:
Now there's a thought! Will consider it if I do an interlude, make him prove who is really in the drivers seat before the Avengers, I mean I don't know about you but you would think they would test for possessions, brainwashing and mind swaps as well instead of just shape shifters. They really let me down...or more to the point they slipped further down after the mess of AvX not that X-men were better in my book.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [1 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from DragonBard
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Cool, though I think Magick would have fit Dawn better than Kitty Pride. Time/Space/Dimensional portal opening teleporter? For the Key? Fits.
Comments from author:
Thank you, though there are two major factors that made me not choose her for any of the characters, one I don't like her character and I mean I reeeeally don't like her because ever she since she was brought back she has made some major mistakes with the people who cared about her especially her brother. And another is I am involving their memories and it would not be fair to subject Dawn or any of the girls to her dark memories, it is that same reason I chose not to use X-23 no matter how much I like her, this will be exemplified later on with Xander given that Steve is a WWII veteran.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [31 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from BotticellisMuse
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Thanks so much for the update! I like how you included the question of being ready to be strong given to the potentials when they were mass-called. That's a subtle and very nice touch! Wishing you and yours a Happy and Blessed New Year too! And here's to hoping for more inspiration for your writing muse!
Comments from author:
I had considered not going there for a moment but I thought what better way to cap off the chapter than by having that phrase be said to her by a more powerful being. Let us hope my muse is as kind to me this year as it was the past one.
Review By [BotticellisMuse] • Date [31 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from mendal
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I like how you put in "are you ready to be strong?"
Review By [mendal] • Date [31 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter nine" from raxadian
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So Buffy gets to be an Asgardian goddess? Wonder how she will react to certain Troll god...
Comments from author:
Hmm, true but you just gave me a wonderful, stupid and dare I say crazy idea for a future encounter with her.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from raxadian
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Well, the problem with having a big group is not that only is harder to write, is also harder to give the heroes a believable treat to face. Adam could work, as he was somewhat immune to reality warping.
Comments from author:
Well yeah that is true but I also need the experience and move away a bit from Xander centric fics, hope I succeed. Well you also to take into account that yes Glory, Adam and Jasmine are probably the bigger threats to such a group but are factoring in also the threats from the DC verse?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [31 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter seven" from DragonBard
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Re: The What If? issue with Iron Man as Sorcerer Supreme.

Basically, Tony Stark drove Dr Strange (while he was still a practicing surgeon) home, and had a car wreck, which caused Strange to loose his ability to perform surgery.

Appalled by what he'd done, Tony Stark went to try and find a method to fix it, and eventually tracked down the Ancient One, and became his apprentice, like Strange did in canon.

Eventually, he built an armor for himself, though it was different from the canon armor, and combined it with magic I believe (most of my info is second hand. I think there is a wikipedia page about it.)
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [30 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter seven" from RogueAngel
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Hey, thanks for the update. Nice to see the start of the hero meetings. Buffy would be a hard one to convince, with her I just wanna be a normal girl thing. Maybe she came be told its not her destiny to fight the forces of darkness alone and die young anymore (that point only would have her happy), but that she could choice to help those she loves protect the innocent. Which in the end she might go for, Buffy is nothing if not a hero. Adding protecting her loved ones to helping those in trouble. Because truthfully is Buffy really did wanted to stop being the slayer, she would have. But her guilt about not helping when she could and her desire to protect keep pulling her back. Maybe work with that?
Looking forward to more.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [3 Nov 14] • Not Rated
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