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Review of chapter "Prologue, Consequences" from Russell
Review: has been well over... monday and i would personally love to see more of this story. So...will there be an update?? :-))
Review By [Russell] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Consequences" from darkplayer
Very interesting start. I have always like the Halloween point for making changes in the story. The story has potential and I look forward to seeing how it develops further. Keep up the great work and please update soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you! You'll likely see chapter one no later than this coming Monday.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Consequences" from BaileyMatutine
I'm a little concerned about the upcoming X/Graham. While I can believe Elle being fucked up enough to get in a relationship with somebody from the Company after they experimented on her, Xander has her memories, none of her indoctrination, and The Initiative is a totally different outfit besides. I just can't see X willingly getting involved with anyone from the Initiative, considering what they do there. I can see X getting involved with Graham before learning what The Initiative does, but afterwards, I can't see them staying together. I know that Graham is one of the few good guys there, so I won't say that them getting back together after that is impossible, but I do think it to be extraordinarily unlikely, especially if X is with Anya at the time, who is likely to encourage X not to forgive a perceived betrayal.
Comments from author:
While I can't say much without spoiling, the X/Graham in this story was one of the most detailed storylines when I began writing notes for this story. I wanted the pairing because I actually liked Graham quite a bit in the series and was disappointed in the minimal role he played in the long run. I'm hoping to do the character and this specific pairing justice, so I can promise I'll be putting 110% into it.
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Consequences" from kyro
well things just got a hole lot better for Xan in the long run Season 5 forward when he was to turned into a extra or spacefiller/ or joke. He is not the powerless one anymore and congrats on not overpowering him either. Can i hope He/She deep fires Spike before we get the rerun of the hole Angel/Buffy. I hope when Buff comes up with the idea that he/she needs to be out of the slaying Xan gives her a electroshock therapy to get it through her head she is not tell people what to do just because she a slayer at that point Faith was THE Slayer not her. Still hope Xan wont go nuts like Elle did. can wait for more!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying things so far and hope that future chapters will continue to satisfy.
Review By [kyro] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Consequences" from Glongi
Ok. I had read the bold parts...

I have no problems with gender bending - or outright swapping - stories, just could not imagine how one could dress as Elle Bishop? Not that she had any costume or other deciding characteristics... Hm... I am reading the story even for just to find out that! ;)

Also, it is too short, a personal problem with lots of stories. Writing a fanfiction, and not making it into a novel just tells me that ... AHhhhrg!... Well, I wont turn on the flames just now, who knows...
Comments from author:
I'm about three quarters of the way through the first chapter and have surpassed seven thousand words already. If there's one thing I can assure you that you don't need to worry about in regards to my stories, it's their length.

I usually find myself worrying that they're going to be TOO long.
Review By [Glongi] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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