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Review of chapter "Part 27" from TorturedAngel
Review:
Cute story! Thanks for sharing, now some smut ;D
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [15 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27" from Geyer
Review:
I really enjoyed the story. You came up with a great mix of dads, plus Blair (snicker), and having those sneaky deities have multiple agendas just seemed so natural. Nice solution, though rather disturbing, for the Wraith and the Ori, although both groups really deserve disturbing ends. I'm looking forward to reading the followups, to see how life goes for this crew and their kids. Will Spike be entering the story in the future? He'd be great at protecting and spoiling a reborn Tara.

Of course, I'd love to see more on the other stories you have posted here as well. I started reading Contents Under Pressure a couple of years ago, even if it was still a WIP; great idea, well worth continuing.

Is there a site where you have all the latest versions of your stories archived? I have some saved, Labyrinth and When Living Ain't Easy and a few others, but I'd love to revisit and see if you've finished or written more on stories that were still WIP before they were lost in the demise of The Silver Snitch and Angelfire.
Comments from author:
Affnet, Spanderfiles.com and HPFandom.net are the primary places to find my stories, but you probably won't find much on updates - for nearly 3 yrs, real life prevented me from any sort of writing at all. This story was me... weaning myself back into things. I've got plans to at least attempt continuing my WIPs (hopefully a bit to each before the end of the year), but I can't make promises about how much will get done. Reality is *somewhat* stable now, but not close to being a great environment for writing as much as I used to. There's several followup stories and missing scenes to come for this one before the end of the month (fingers crossed), but huh... I hadn't considered putting Spike in. Weird for me, since he's one of my favorite characters. Will have to think on that one *grin*

Anyways, thanks for your lovely comments and interest in my stories. It's appreciated muchly :)
Review By [Geyer] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27" from greysh
Review:
I loved this fic :) very nice. I wish there was more about the babies and them growing up.
Comments from author:
That's part of what the second story will be for. More should be up soonish - having to combat my kids' boredom on holiday break at the moment. Thanks for following along, and yes, there will be short scenes about the children included *grin*
Review By [greysh] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27" from Aayesha
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I've been following this story on Rough Trade but for some reason my logon there isn't working and I couldn't leave you the comments you deserved for NaNo. This has been such a good time as it developed with lots of surprises. I don't know SPN well but it didn't matter. I loved the story and it was one that I checked back each day to follow. The fact that it is a rough draft is part of the fun of NaNo and in no way detracts from the writing. I read that you haven't written in a while but it doesn't show. You still have it! I hope you have had fun and continue to write more.

Thanks for the work you put into the story this month and exceeding your word goal before the deadline. It's been much appreciated even if you didn't get all the comments you deserved.
Comments from author:
You're very welcome, and thanks in return for all your lovely comments. Yes, I'm out of practice - this is pretty much fluff compared to what I'm used to, but I wasn't convinced I could maintain the right frame of mind for my 'normal' types. I'm continuing the storyline with little drips and drabs of scenes (though that's getting very mixed reactions so far) and bringing it back up to my comfort zone of hard R-NC17.

People - especially nasty troll types - have never been a deterrent for me. It's real life junk - bills, moving, jobs, kids etc. Right now that's all fairly calm, so I jumped on the chance to start writing again.

Again, thank you so very much for saying such wonderful things! Writing isn't something I do for applause... but it certainly doesn't hurt either *grin*
Review By [Aayesha] • Date [21 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27" from wdlwbt
Review:
This was really good.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [wdlwbt] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27" from nchakra
Review:
Thanks for sharing this story. I'm sad that it's over. This is the best story I have read in a long time. I can't wait for your next story. Once again, thanks for writing and sharing this with us.
Comments from author:
Thank you! That's a wonderful compliment, and I'm blushing fiercely over how pleased I am to hear it. For the record, I've got about twelve snippets of scenes/chapters that didn't make the cut for FMLG - quite a few are sex scenes, but some are confrontations (example: John Winchester finds out he's a grandfather). Also plan on reworking the four others I've got here on TTH - probably first Contents Under Pressure, then Surviving and Missing Persons.

I'm pretty torn up about it being over, but the story's not *done* from my point of view.

May you continue to enjoy reading, read what you enjoy, and find all sorts of little gems in the strangest places (like the time I was looking for Daddy!Jack and found Jack/Faith pairing ... wtf? but good!)
Review By [nchakra] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27" from iroshi
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I got to the end of For My Little Girl, and seeing the promise for future tidbits in that universe, I headed to your author page to see if I wanted to set a tracking alert for all your stories. I found several really awesome stories that are regrettably far too short and unfinished! I really, really liked Surviving, but Missing Persons, Found Lives, Peaceful Reflections, and Contents Under Pressure are all awesome and I'd especially like to see Contents and Surviving continued if there's any chance. I see that none of your other stories have been worked on for three years, though, so I understand if there's no chance of the muse coming back for them. I'll pout, but I'll understand. :)

In the meantime, I really enjoyed For My Little Girl - I love reading Daddy!Xander stories - and I hope you write a lot more in this universe. I'm looking forward to some smut as well, because you set up some really nice pairings here ;) but I want to read about the kids growing up with allllll those daddies, how things work out for these guys in the universe (just because the gods have set up a lot of protection for the rugrats doesn't mean the fecal matter won't hit the rotating blades at some point), and finding out what other things the gods are hinting at that the guys are going to have to handle. It stands to reason that they wouldn't go to all the trouble of bringing these points of light back into the universe, especially the effort they've set up to keep them safe, unless there was an *industrial* sized oscillating air current distribution device with a full barnyard heading toward it at some point in the future that the recirculated souls are going to be needed to prevent/fix/handle.
Comments from author:
LOL! You've brought up a few points that no one else noticed, and yes I do have plans for the 'fan' *grin*

As for my earler stories... It was never my intent to abandon them. The past 2+ years have been... hell on earth for me. NaNo was the excuse I needed to refind the spark that made me want to write after *finally* getting into a more stable environment. Surviving has more chapters that just need lots of editing. MPFL and Contents have the whole story outlined, just needs dialogue. Reflections... I'm hoping to reread it so the plot comes back. WIPs piss me off, especially my own.

I'm thrilled you enjoy my stories - whether kid!fics or smex. Admittedly, I'm a smut slut, but most of my FRAO fics aren't crossovers so I left them on other sites for now. HPFandom and Spanderfiles - both under the same name. When I've got an answer from my NaNo moderator about adding deleted scenes/outtakes/smut/future ficlets in same or new project file, I'll start posting them here as well - listed in the same series, but different file. *hugs* Thanks!
Review By [iroshi] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27" from sekmarc
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That was brilliant! Now I don't feel so bad about staying up all night playing a stupid game since it let me get an early look at these last chapters. My only complaint is the fact that this story ended before we got to see any significant interaction with the babies. As such, I look forward to those epilogues and outtakes you promised. Thanks so much for posting this story and congratulations on exceeding your NaNo goal! Good luck on your WIPs! Happy Writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I needed it to stop *right here* due to other things happening that are damned near forcing a full-length sequel. Which I don't want. So snippets and meeting the family/co-workers/friends scenes (example: when John and/or Sam see the domesticated Dean the first time, holding their daughter) will follow a mostly logical order. BUT! Some will be smutty, others cutesy, others funny or angsty. I'll post warnings at the top of each chapter... or even in the chapter title if that'd be easier. The story is over, but the storyline is not. It just won't leave me alone *lol*

Anyways, thanks for following along and all your wonderful comments. They've been greatly appreciated *hugs*
Review By [sekmarc] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27" from Misty
Review:
*clapping & sniffing* That was fabtastic! Thank you for an amazing story & good luck with your other stories. x
Comments from author:
*bows* Thank you! Appreciate every positive comment I've received for this one. And with the storm of falling plot bunnies last night, it's not likely to be the last you'll hear from me anytime soon ;)
Review By [Misty] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27" from imokit
Review:
Brilliant story, brilliant ending! Though I'd love a John/Sam Winchester seen where they find out that Dean's settled down into parenthood.
Comments from author:
That's in the plans! And a few other family members/co-workers as well. Some of the snippets, deleted scenes, and out of place scenes will be posted with the smut. Promise, I'll mark each entry very clearly! I'm really happy that you've enjoyed it. And sorta depressed that it's over. So I'm letting the bunnies run free and turn rabid as they will. *hugs*
Review By [imokit] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 26" from Misty
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re Chapter 25: I need a fan! Where's my fan? & my glasses are steaming up! fab chapter, congrats on keeping the rating down.... Somehow. Chapter 26: Its that easy? No wonder nobody thought of it :) Thank you for both fabtastic chapter... Now, where's my lens cleaner?
Comments from author:
LOL Thanks! I do plan on adding a few smutty scenes after the ending (which isn't far off at all). Will probably turn it into a different file here, just so no one screams about turning a kid!fic into smut. Though how they think kids are made... ;)
Review By [Misty] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 25" from Starfall
Review:
Total gigglefest. Love how this is going can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Got more to post tonight - just working on the html *hugs* thanks!
Review By [Starfall] • Date [19 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 24" from Dogfire
Review:
I love this story! I can't wait to see where you take it next.
Comments from author:
Why thank you! I'm working on writing all sorts of scenes, but we're doing Thanksgiving this week instead of on time, so... who knows when I'll have a free moment *grin* Have something up soonish.
Review By [Dogfire] • Date [18 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 24" from TorturedAngel
Review:
I love this story!!! I love the little plot twist at the end! Sooo much fun!!! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm trying to keep the girly geeks on track right now, but they keep wanting to torment Kevin for some reason.
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [17 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 24" from Misty
Review:
*heart melting from all the cuteness* Thank you
Comments from author:
Thank you, ma'am! It's a stretch from what I usually write, which was the point. Have to pause pretty often to shiver at the 'aww' feelings. And force back the smut bunnies. I'm still determined to leave this story PG-13 or so. All sex will be part of outtakes in a separate file. Must.... resist....
Review By [Misty] • Date [17 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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