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Review of chapter "Rebel Yell" from raxadian
Review:
I love her sarcasm.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [1 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The New Step 3 – Defection" from raxadian
Review:
Well, kind of a jaded view for this early in the show, but then, they see her as one of the bad guys.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Princess Pylea" from raxadian
Review:
Yeah spies that used the sewage system.
Comments from author:
The rebels don't know that they used the sewage system.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Once More, Into the Dimensional Breach" from raxadian
Review:
You could just do a summary of the parts that are exactly like the show.
Comments from author:
That would be most of the chapter, Rax. But the extra dialogue from Lilah (and the changed dialogue in reaction to her) is important to developing, in a logical way, her transition from hostile person renting a room they don't trust forward to not that.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [11 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Belonging and Banter" from raxadian
Review:
Oh, girl got a plan?
Comments from author:
Thanks for all the reviews! Glad you liked the fic!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Derailment" from raxadian
Review:
Well, he knows his job after all.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Step 2 - Bribery" from raxadian
Review:
Well, she is smart, you have to handle her that.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Step 1 - Blackmail" from raxadian
Review:
Oh, this is gonna be good...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Belonging and Banter" from Dmitri
Review:
So far this is a really good story. Please continue.
Comments from author:
I plan to. Glad you like it. :)
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The New Step 3 – Defection" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
I'm kind of looking forward to seeing what you do with this one, and where it goes. Lilah well written is always a good read, and you have a good grasp of her characterization.

Chapters are a bit short for my tastes, but at least they're entertaining and riveting.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Derailment" from Hyperion
Review:
Nice new chapter and looking forward to seeing where you take this in the future.

I like the idea of seeing the Fang Gang destroying the Wolfram & Hart warehouse and saving the infants. Even if it's not a major blow to their operations, it will be interesting seeing Wolfram & Hart being forced onto the defensive for a change instead of doing whatever they want and the Fang Gang being the ones having to react.

Having Lilah's mother kidnapped is rather interesting and a challenge in and of itself. Her mother is the only thing we know of outside of her own career that Lilah seemed to worry about or truly care about(not counting her relationship with Wesley). On the one hand, trying to rescue her would be a reasonable goal. OTOH, bad as it would be, "Angel" and "Buffy" where never shy about killing off people, even main characters from time to time. If something happens to her mother, I could see her teaming up with Angel Investigations and possibly the folks in Sunnydale and all but declaring war on Wolfram & Hart and their clients.

One thing I'd be interested in also. Even if she's not fully aware of the organization or their exact role with Wolfram & Hart, I wonder if Lilah is aware of the Circle of the Black Thorn, or at least aware that some of the members are involved with Wolfram & Hart. Even if they don't go after the organization as a whole, maybe that demon Senator or another individual member might become a target.
Review By [Hyperion] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Derailment" from AllenPitt
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Looks like she'll be sticking with the Fang Gang for a while. At least they took down the warehouse with her info.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Derailment" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Step 2 - Bribery" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm now is Lindsey one step ahead or one step behind...good chapter.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Step 2 - Bribery" from Hyperion
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Lilah really knows how to screw Wolfram & Hart good. I approve of this action.

I don't know if that was just filler information or what, but since Lilah mentioned that Wolfram & Hart had information on Buffy and the folks in Sunnydale, depending on where this storyline goes, any possibility of Angel Investigations giving Buffy or Giles a call or visit to pass along some information?

Even if Lindsey has Lilah's mother in captivity, her idea of giving copies of the information she has to Angel might be a good way to further throw W&H off balance, especially if Angel decides that going after a few clients or some of their operations is a good idea over the coming days and weeks.

I'd be kind if interested to see also if the Senior Partners decide that some of the upper management in the LA branch are no longer fit for their jobs.
Review By [Hyperion] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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